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GrimWarlock

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First thing I'll say for now - keep expanding what you have. Its too small for an actual review, but just enough to peek my interest. So, get some more lore and setting details explained for now, establish characters and story and so forth. I shal keep an eye on it.
 
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Thanks! I have a bit more to update just releasing small portions at a time will update the post when I added more
 

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Good so far. Nothing spectacular mind you but its early to judge, I'd say you're off to a good enough start.
I'd also like to see some lore if its not too much trouble. I just personaly really enjoy lore
 
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There is more lore just the way im releasing it is small passages at a time once the first chapter is finished you'll see some of the lore dont wanna rush into it just yet
 
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