You know what? who cares if it sucks

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by Kakashi, Feb 16, 2007.

  1. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    i know im not a good poet, but whatever..


    Dream

    Sit by the windowsill
    and watch the rain come down
    think of things
    that will never happen
    but smile as you do
    and continue to create
    a world unssen
    a fantasy, all you own
    for one day
    be ready
    your dream may come true
     
  2. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Smile

    Smile
    think of better times
    and better places
    think of now
    or think of later
    think of what makes you smile
    for if you do not
    life might fade away
     
  3. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Color

    Bursting open
    Like a new life
    It shows us
    All its shades and tints

    We smile
    As we look upon it
    Thikning of the possibilites,
    Our dreams
    And then we lie back down
    and continue to dream
    of a color filled horizion
    and a shining sky
     
  4. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Rain

    A droplet forms
    and falls from the sky
    Fighting past the others
    Then finds a home on my windowsill
    Landing in my clear view

    I stop to think
    Then smile
    It is raining just for me
     
  5. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Second

    A second
    It seems unnesasary
    Useless
    But think of what can happen
    In a second
    A birth
    A death
    Or maybe the end
    Think of it
    And you may think twice
    Before you blink
     
  6. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Pain

    Pain ruptures through my veins
    Bubbling and pushing
    Trying to get out
    But here it will stay
    Inside of me
    Until more sorrow comes
    Shredding my innocience
    Crying out
    As i sit
    And feel the pain
     
  7. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Winter is coming

    A delicate branch
    Holding a single golden leaf
    Sways in the wind
    It is a memory
    Of a time soon to pass
    And one soon to begin

    Soon snow will blanket these hills
    And ice will cover all
    In a film
    Thin but certian

    A cold wind will blow
    And streams will freeze over
    But not now

    Now
    A single golden leaf hangs
    On a delicate branch
    Swaying and rocking in the breeze

    But now
    It falls
    Until it finds its way to the ground
    Where it will stay
    Until finally the snow comes
    Covering up the golden beauty
    Forevermore
     
  8. The peoples champion

    The peoples champion The peoples champion

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    Well as long as you give your best it does not matter if your poem if good or not:) .
     
  9. rhapsody of serendai

    rhapsody of serendai Thorn's Lover

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    Why would you think these suck? I really like them!
     
  10. Kakashi

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    thank you :)
     
  11. saiqa

    saiqa Innocent evil...

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    I don't think they suck..they're really cool! :)