Wanderers Lullaby

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by Zidane, Apr 26, 2005.

  1. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    As we wander endlessly,
    Cross this land called life,
    We walk forever restlessly,
    The wind always at our backs,
    We wander because it's all to much to bear,
    So we dash off into the sunset,
    Just trying to get away from it all,
    As we laughed under violet skies,
    We prayed for the wings of Angels,
    And flew into midnight darkness,
    Shining diamonds against the void,
    And somewhere among the stars,
    We find salvation,
    Shining like a light,
    To guide us home at last.
     
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  2. Adina

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    Wow that's good Zidane. Congratulations :)
     
  3. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    Thanks alot,you should try your hand at some poetry.
     
  4. Liadan

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    Again, another awesome poem! :)
     
  5. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    Thanks,I just hate it took me so long to do,stupid writers block.
     
  6. Adina

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    I've written heaps of poetry but being the perfectionist I am, it's never good enough :(
     
  7. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    Take a chance and post some anyways,I'm sure their wonderful.
     
  8. Celestial Wanderer

    Celestial Wanderer searching for peace...

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    Its the same with me too. I wite poetry too, but when I read all of your poems, i feel like mine isn't as good.
     
  9. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    So post'em anyways man whether you think they're good or not,I mean hell I'm not really confident with mine but since all you guys seem to like them I guess their okay.Don't worry they'll be great.
     
  10. Senekha

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    I"m a perfectionist, too, but I force myself to finish and display things; otherwise, it just stagnates.
     
  11. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    Agreed.
     
  12. Lady Dark Moon

    Lady Dark Moon Goddess of Black Magic

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    yeah I like displaying mine but when I read someone else's I feel like I could do better
     
  13. gohekan

    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Well zidane I guess you need to post a poem about poetry to inspire our untapped power of poets.
     
  14. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    That is an excellent idea,I'll get started on that immediatly.
     
  15. gohekan

    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    lol sweet!
     
  16. Riskesh of the Red

    Riskesh of the Red New Member

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    heh, nice poem. I relate to the wanderers so it pulled on my heart...Good poem. :)
     
  17. Zidane

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    Thanks.
     
  18. imagine99

    imagine99 Fia, the kind fencer

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    Wow. That was good. Like chocolate. Really awesome :) And your set is cool too :)
     
  19. Zidane

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    Thanks.