I have been writing a fanfiction recently, a crossover between Lord of the Rings and HBO's Game of Thrones. The scenario: Ten years after Aegon's Landing, the nine ships of Elendil and his sons wash up on the western shores of Westeros. Three centuries later, they lead their people as part of the realm of Gondor, one of the Eight Kingdoms ruled by King Robert Baratheon. Now, with the appointment of Isildur son of Elendil as Hand of the King, the men of Numenor find themselves embroiled in the Game of Thrones. The four chapters of my story are currently posted on Fanfiction.net. Here is the link: The House of Elendil I could also post the chapters on this forum if you guys would prefer to read it that way. Either way, I'm looking for constructive criticism as well as suggestions for improvement or future development of the story. I have it plotted out in my head so far, but I'm always open to suggestions. Thoughts?