The Breaking of My Soul

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  1. Nehmahati

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    The Breaking of My Soul

    Pain, break this pain out
    Make me bleed so I can see
    Tear my heart out
    With my soul
    To free me from this misery

    Eye in eye
    This pain inside
    You can not see it
    For you are blind

    Are my screams enough for you?
    I seem to have lost my faith
    Brand me with my dying words
    The beast inside for me to wake

    When we were lost
    When we were broken
    You didn't really care
    Your children would
    Scream out for you
    But you wouldn't even dare

    I broke this silence
    With my thoughts
    These redeeming ways of mine
    I broke your passion
    I broke your hate
    All I needed was time

    You see me now
    As you dwell
    And drown amongst your griefs
    You have lost me
    For your words
    Have brought this new release

    Cover me now, Cover me
    In my shining rage
    Tempt me with your ever words
    To trap me in this cage

    Tear me now, Tear me
    For my soul is lost
    In this gamble for your sanity
    My soul was the cost

    Hear me now, as you have not
    For my heart was killed
    My soul was lost
    But yours will die
    Forever in your guilt.
    © Keisha Courville 2003
    ~Nehmahati Kerosna (Kala)
     
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    Zidane Master Thief

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    I liked this poem alot have you had a lot of pain in your life?
     
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    Yeah....I've been through quite a lot, but what doesn't break you makes you stronger.

    ~Nehmahati Kerosna (kala)
     
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    Or paralyzes you whatever works.
     
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