The Banquet - Short Story

Discussion in 'Original Works' started by darkfox, Apr 23, 2009.

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Your opinion of the story?

  1. Good

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    100.0%
  2. Bad

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  3. Needs work

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  1. darkfox

    darkfox New Member

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    78 views and 2 people overcame laziness to comment. wow.

    well. thanks darkloch and black tattoo for your feedback. I do appreciate it.
     
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  2. Darkloch

    Darkloch Love Sara

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    I liked it, always a fan of stories with a twist.
     
  3. Black Tattoo

    Black Tattoo The Corruptor

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    I voted good. I loved your descriptiveness! The scenery was really great and the twist was unexpected! Loved it :D
     
  4. darkfox

    darkfox New Member

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    thanks very much
     
  5. Black Tattoo

    Black Tattoo The Corruptor

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    Most welcome :D
     
  6. Normf

    Normf Death 'n' Roll

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    I would... But there is nothing to read. Did you remove it?
     
  7. darkfox

    darkfox New Member

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    i did remove it. someone decided it was good enough to publish
     
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    Normf Death 'n' Roll

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    Well i think you have got alot of talent, so good luck with that!
     
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    Most excellent news! Best of luck! :D