The 14 Day Saga: Sunsnine...

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by RayCaptain, Jun 6, 2012.

  1. RayCaptain

    RayCaptain Stranger in a Strange Land

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    I will call your name, until I can breathe again,
    Because when I'm with you, I'm with a friend,
    Fill my chest up with sweet smells,
    I hear doves cooing and church bells...

    It won't be long now, until we have forever,
    And I can't think of a way to make it clever,
    All I can say is that it will be divine,
    This single step, now number nine...

    Sweet fragrances, wild grass and snow,
    Come to brave the waves, too and fro,
    And arrive in a land of glorious sunshine,
    Where this perfect princess will be mine...

    And I will be hers, and so will this land,
    So she'll brave the airs, to take my hand,
    What a brave girl, from a far away place,
    In a strange new land, with a friendly face...

    Fourteen we need, nine we have behind,
    Before we go out, with heart and mind,
    To conquest the land of glorious sun,
    And we cannot wait, until it is only one...
     
  2. Lord Yuan

    Lord Yuan Hell Woman

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    Your titles are getting too hilarious now. These puns are just getting to be too much for me, man. I wonder how you are going to keep it up, can't wait.
     
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    Pyrofyre From the ashes, I rise

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