Thank You...

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by RayCaptain, Oct 19, 2012.

  1. RayCaptain

    RayCaptain 如朱

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    Hey you, I know your name,
    I no longer choose to play your game,
    Collecting the ashes of my life,
    Tugging against chains of strife...

    You have me pinned down, caged up like a slave,
    And it never occurred to you that consequences can be grave,
    Just biding my time in this personal hell,
    Just waiting to get out of this cell...

    Can't take back what has been said,
    The story only ends after we're both dead,
    So turn the page and read between the lines,
    Set fire to your heart and burn away parasitic vines...

    Now all I can say is thank you,
    I just can't wait to break you,
    Heart comes before mind and mind before bone,
    Justice will be served, sins have to be atoned...

    I can't escape you, so I must kill or be killed,
    Would it be wrong to admit that I'm thrilled?
    Banging my head against a cement wall,
    Feeling my way around in the dark as I crawl...

    This is for all that you've done for me,
    But I can't help but wonder if you'd forsee,
    What was to come, how this would go,
    What we've become, reap what we sow...

    Seeds of lies and creeping distrust,
    Grow into blossoming flowers of disgust,
    And now, all I can do is say thank you,
    Because I always wanted to hate you...

    Putting the pieces back in place,
    Of this mirror so maybe I can see my face,
    The eyes of mine enemy, a love no more,
    The face I cannot help but to adore...

    Lift my middle finger to the sky and give a rebel yell,
    Just before I draw my sword and charge headlong into Hell,
    If only to spite what was left of my life,
    Because words cut deeper than this knife...

    But never forget, never forgive,
    My one and only curse is to live,
    And I have to say, before my mind goes blank too,
    What I want to say is... Thank you...
     
  2. JNK

    JNK King of tards

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    Amen
     
  3. S.J. Faerlind

    S.J. Faerlind Flashlight Shadowhunter

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    Wow... some powerful emotion in that one RC: well done in my opinion.
     
  4. Taliesyn

    Taliesyn It's a feral reality out there, kids.

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    I have to second SJ's sentiments, RC. You write fine poetry.