Hello! I've just started doing a bit of writing, I think it's not great but is ok and would like any opinions/critisisms to help me get better so I would be really grateful to anyone who could provide such! The link is here: http://darkrosemelody.livejournal.com/1673.html It's the start of an ongoing fantasy novel. So please tell me what good (if anything), what's bad etc... Much love and thanks. Rose.