Start of story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Dark Rose, Mar 5, 2009.

  1. Dark Rose

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    Hello! I've just started doing a bit of writing, I think it's not great but is ok and would like any opinions/critisisms to help me get better so I would be really grateful to anyone who could provide such! :)

    The link is here:

    http://darkrosemelody.livejournal.com/1673.html

    It's the start of an ongoing fantasy novel. So please tell me what good (if anything), what's bad etc...

    Much love and thanks.

    Rose.