OK, so I'm going to try and do a "book trailer". It's kind of like a movie trailer but it's for a series of books instead. In it there will be 5 images which are basically scenes from the story. Since I'm not a very good artist I was hoping you guys might give some constructive criticism on how to improve the artwork. I'm shooting for something that looks like a painting out of a medieval manuscript with the images. I'll give you an example: http://blog.europeana.eu/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/manuscript2_optimised.jpg Each image will have the same "frame" around the scene from the story like the medieval page shown above does. I spent today painting that and this is what I came up with: Thoughts? Suggestions?