Shore of Life

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  1. Sturmulus

    Sturmulus New Member

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    Shore of Life

    The sun sets on the shore of life as grey clouds burst over the horizon

    I find myself feeling lost

    Confused as to the location of my lost consciousness

    Deprived of pure righteousness

    I strive to get a grip on reality

    Perplexed as to the whereabouts of my sanity

    Wandering aimlessly through the valley of my subconscious mind

    I emerge only to find blackness. A blankness covered in blankets

    Quilted over by the weaving patterns of life’s thoroughness

    To block out the point of why I’m standing here

    Afraid to admit that I struggle to see the forest through the trees, I fall to my knees

    Hands reaching, outstretched to find the point to all of this

    This, a word that means nothing while meaning everything

    Devoid of feeling, destroyed by emptiness

    This cyclical existence keeps me guessing this

    The sun rises over the shore of life as grey clouds burst into nothingness​
     
  2. Emerlas

    Emerlas Emerz

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    once again your talent in poetry is amazing
    I love it!
     
  3. Druid of Lûhn

    Druid of Lûhn The Little Lamb.

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    It's nice to have a new and talented poet here! Loved it Sturmulus. :)
     
  4. Sturmulus

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    Thank you! I really appreciate it