Discussion in 'Original Works' started by Alone, Jul 24, 2009.
[removed - thanks again for all the kind words]
FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC! You, sir, are a poet. Don't let anyone tell you any different. If I could rep you again I would.:draught:
That brought a tear to my eye. Seriously. You've captured in words something we all experience, which is the mark of a true philosopher. 10 out of 10, my man.
Anyone educated enough to namecheck Sisyphus deserves a whole load of rep. Great poem!
I can't really add to what has already been said. Poetry should speak to the soul, and I was touched by your words. Again, another 10/10.
I think you're all being far too generous with your praise. This doggerel (for that's what it is) is simply the way I while away idle hours. Still, your comments are appreciated. It's nice to know my time is not completely wasted. Thank you.
Having read what you've posted elsewhere your verse becomes ever more poignant. I congratulate you on your honesty - most men would shy away from baring their soul in such a way. My admiration for you increases by the day.
Was it that obvious? Oh well, like I said, alcohol makes me maudlin. There's a lesson to be learnt there...
I know nothing about poetry, but you obviously have a real talent. I loved it.!
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