Rain

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by Princess Celebmirril, May 13, 2004.

  1. Princess Celebmirril

    Princess Celebmirril PRINCESS

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    Rain

    It falls,
    Dropping on the roof like tiny marbles
    Dropping, dropping
    Peaceful, calm
    Almost as a song.
     
  2. Crusader

    Crusader Disturber of the Peace

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    Lovely.

    I really like rain, so it makes it even better.
     
  3. Princess Celebmirril

    Princess Celebmirril PRINCESS

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    Thank you very much I love listening to the rain.
     
  4. Radagast

    Radagast Art House Member

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    Could be a little longer.:p, Unless your going for the whole simplicity outlook, in which case not to bad.
     
  5. Princess Celebmirril

    Princess Celebmirril PRINCESS

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    It's my first poem so I am just starting off and decided to go with a shorter one. I may add onto it later.
     
  6. Crusader

    Crusader Disturber of the Peace

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    I just love the rain outside, streaming down, thunder booming, and me in the warm house. There is NOTHING more relaxing and calming.

    If the rain was warm and not cold, Id fall asleep in it!
     
  7. LadyoftheGoldenWood

    LadyoftheGoldenWood Well-Known Member

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    Hey I now what you man by that Crusader, I would to. I love it Celeb, I have all ways loved the rain, tasting it and smelling it. It is raining a lot here right now to.
     
  8. Princess Celebmirril

    Princess Celebmirril PRINCESS

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    I wish it was raining here.
     
  9. Crusader

    Crusader Disturber of the Peace

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    Me too, You'd expect it in england, but during the summer its pretty dry and sunny.
     
  10. LadyoftheGoldenWood

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    so celeb do you have any more pomes?
     
  11. Princess Celebmirril

    Princess Celebmirril PRINCESS

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    Not at this moment but I am working on another one.