Pursuit of Truth

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  1. Radagast

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    A Continuous Pursuit of Truth:

    Search within your mind eternally.
    Exhaust yourself with countless theories.
    Question humans with profound knowledge.
    Never come to accept a single conclusion.
    Pray for the discovery of an answer.
    Let the need to learn seep through.
    The step over deaths cliff will provide resolution.
    Until then, let Faith remain incomplete.



    (Wrote this one up last night. It feels like it needs a bit of work, but I'm not to sure in which direction. Your thoughts appreciated :))
     
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  2. LadyoftheGoldenWood

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    ya it is missing somthing not sure what I will think about it. but then I am not that good at wright!
     
  3. Lady_of_Shalott

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    I actually kind of like it the way it is Radagast. It was basically just like you thinking.... I wouldn't change much, if anything.
     
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    Interesting stuff, thanks :). I probably won't go messing around looking to change it unless something comes to me suddenly. Mainly, now that I reflect, it was one of those poems where I just needed to write down my thoughts. At least I'm satisfied with that.
     
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    well that is good and the more you read it the beter it is.