Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by olivia_the_lamb, Jul 30, 2008.
asking to be left
Another good poem!
Keep up the good work.
really? i thought it was shite lol
no, its good!
Its short, but its sort of cryptic and coolness.
The rhythm you've used for this is interesting. Is it coincidence that it goes 2, 2, 7, 7, 5, 5, 2? Or did you use a structure?
I don't use structure
Structure is for squares and Amish.
That'll be coincidence then.
~I apologise for taking an interest.. ¬_¬
lol no I was jk mostly
I just really don't ever use structure, and least not on purpose
Yeah, I was kidding except for the part about the Amish.
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