Padmé's poem

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by Padmé, Feb 6, 2005.

  1. Lady Cyllíeth

    Lady Cyllíeth WillExplodeUnderPressure

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    You have to listen to Padmé when she sings!
    It's amazing!
     
  2. DeadBoromir

    DeadBoromir REAL AMERICAN PIZZA!

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    Why have I never heard her sing? Why? I want to listen to her, too!
     
  3. Lady Cyllíeth

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    But your sound card is broke,isn't it?
     
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    I could burn it on a CD and then listen to it. (Wait, I pm you)

    Hey, I forgot to say that your poems/songs are really cool, Tori!
     
  5. Lady Cyllíeth

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    Yeah,they gnah!:D
     
  6. Firiath

    Firiath Halfling barbarian

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    Yeah, they're wonderful! Both Tori's poems and Cedric's story! Awwww, I love them!
     
  7. Celestial Wanderer

    Celestial Wanderer searching for peace...

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    Very Nice poems padme. It was your compariosns with love to many other things that has created an array of similes, a nice,simple poem. Keep posting! I love reaidng poetry. I remeber Zidane to have sent one too, and I hope more people send their works
     
  8. Padmé

    Padmé Mrs Cascador

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    Yeh guys, I used to sing, always at High School for concerts
     
  9. Padmé

    Padmé Mrs Cascador

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    This is very short but I remember it was part of a lyric from a song I wrote when I was 12


    Where am I going?
    Falling through time
    Is this my lifeline?
    Flashing before my eyes

    Should I just go back home or see what lies ahead?
    Should I just take a little chance and see if I am dead?

    I want to live again
    Dancing in the snow
    I want to live again
    Dancing two and fro
     
  10. Firiath

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    Cool you wrote a song when you were 12? I also tried that some years ago, but... oh man, I don't want to think of it.
    But yours sounds really interesting. :p
     
  11. Padmé

    Padmé Mrs Cascador

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    lol The first proper song I wrote when I was about 10 I think--- I can still play it but the lyrics have been long since lost :(
     
  12. Celestial Wanderer

    Celestial Wanderer searching for peace...

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    Nice Padme. Simple and well expressed. Suits the intended audience well.
     
  13. Liadan

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    Ditto, I liked it a lot.