Hey Winter, as you know this is a post apocalyptic RP. There are a few things about your character that seem to be somewhat of a problem. There is very little organization in any type of government. We are talking war-lords, city states, and only a few actually countries. There is no big global agency of any kind on Barteris. As for law enforcement, you don't have enough stability to have anything above a group of vigilantes, such as the "police" in Hell's Kitchen. Also, we are trying to law low on the technology as much as possible. So while we have strayed into the realm of high tech from time to time, we try to keep it low. For instance, no one has anything more complex than a gun, and even guns are a rarity on Barteris. So while a tight fitting suit is not out of the question, a super futuristic, computerized suit needs some explanation on a planet like Barteris. Finally, I think this one is a bit too overwhelming in the power area. It is a bit much to be able to scan a crowd of people and find out what a bunch of people are thinking at any given point in time. It is also a bit much to know exactly what someone is about to do and also have the ability to be untouchable. This character is also incredibly strong, fast, and impossibly undetectable. I'm not a fan of invincibility, omniscience, and absolute stealth. It just seems to me like she can and will do whatever she wants. Now it is possible to make a character very powerful but it requires a lot to do it successfully in an RP. I would say that if we could limit the psychic stuff to Jedi level, it would be more than enough. But I like the way your character looks, and her personality fits in well enough. I think she could work well in this RP with a few minor modifications.