My more or less insane poems

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  1. Via_Amarth

    Via_Amarth Wicked Me

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    Yeah I decided to create a thread to post my poems in, cause I've written a few and..well anyways. Enjoy.


    Boredom

    Boredom

    It seeps into my veins
    As a slow running poison
    It gradually chokes my spirit
    The dreamy grey mist

    Like the dark clouds
    Coming in before the storm
    It sneaks up behind me
    Whispers its lies in my ear

    Enhanced by the pallid sky
    By the cold, lifeless rain
    The poison runs for my heart
    It consumes my entire being

    Its presence leaches my emotions
    Unlit my will, my passion
    It surpresses the voice of my soul
    Strangles the essence of life

    Fallen to the shadow now
    Light and joy is quenched
    So much for freedom
    On a Saturday afternoon
     
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    Dedicated to my source of inspiration, my muse, my fellow malkavian, my friend. Mr. Blue.


    Intriguing Complexion.

    The complexion of your mind mezmerise me
    The intricate pattern of thoughts
    Spun together by perfectionsim
    If you could be mine four hours and hours…

    You’ve trapped me in your complicated web
    I’m captivated by your visions
    Through the lookingglass
    Nothing is revieled
    Can you please then show me, what it’s like?

    Empty corridors
    Yet filled with wisdom
    Dust and cobwebs
    But nothing is what it seems to be

    The path of insanity
    Leads through the mind of yours
    The path to enlightenment
    To the highest star, the deepest cloud

    Insanity but madness, beautiful
    Intelligence beyond belief
    Missunderstood by the world
    But oh so truthful

    Could you but be mine…
    I wanna know the mysteries
    That hides within the dungeon of despair
    Intriguing despair, toxicating
    Liberation, freedom

    No-one is sane but you
    All else is maniacs, lunatics
    You hold the truth in your bossom
    Shall no see it through a broken mirror?
     
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    Dedicated to Blue.
    where it's a gap it says white.. posted it on a forum witha grey background so it doesn't look as fancy here.



    truth in paradox. beauty

    cloud moon light darkness Blue, mist fog tears rain silver, I miss you

    green dim vague clear fresh spirit dream reality

    orange gold sun mix shiny practice fine pretty

    violet scarlet under wonder magic tragic unreal surreal

    explosion white edge fire red black obscure fiend mature

    captivity liberation dungeon castle chains freedom

    glass break dark true faint transperant grief

    death dread crimson metal web pale sorrow

    hiashya swirling chaos mezmerise everything. Nothing.
     
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    cold

    Pool of silent silk, frozen.
    Color of a still winter lake.
    Quiet.

    Still the wind whispers,
    whispers in form of feelings.
    Soft.

    Taste the touch of deleria.
    Dementation, my saviour.
    Pleasure.

    Eat the cold pain.
    Suffer, be whole.

    Die to Live.
     
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    Oddrun I speak languages.

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    whoa...I think they're beautiful Via! they sound so professionally. I prefer prose than poetry but I really enjoyed your poems. damn, you're good!:p
     
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    oh thankees!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D *happy*
     
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    Excellent, I was going to mention my favorite one but they are good. The end of Boredom acually made me laugh. Bring on more!
     
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    yeah I didn't like how trivial it came to end... it's certainly has nothing to do with joy. but hey, if you got happy I'm happy :)