My dispair

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  1. Xaltar

    Xaltar Faen Curunír

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    As I stumble through my lowly life
    I take consolation in the holy night.
    Fall away from summer skies
    Broken hearts, November lies
    Freefall from your sorrows peak
    Into time and reality bleak
    Fade away, don't try to hide
    Within mine heart doth ye not abide
    Listles in my sorrows gale
    From your lips my doom did hail
    Missery lost within your eyes
    In my sleep I hear your crys
    Too late upon your respite
    Now surcumb to blackest night
    In my heart you have no place
    So flee ye now in deep disgrace
    I scream for love
    And beget hate
    I cry for comfort
    But it comes too late
    I hide my eyes as I prepair
    To live eternity in my dispair.
     
  2. Xaltar

    Xaltar Faen Curunír

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    I tought I'd give ryming a try ;)
     
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    Nicely done,better then I can do.
     
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    Xaltar Faen Curunír

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    Thanks but yours was cool :D
     
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    Wish I could think so mine sounds kinda cheesey ot me.
     
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    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    I have read every post in this thread. And all my despiesed old mind can only ring of is one thing , wise men.
    Very , very wise men.Broken in their years of old they write what only they uphold.They tell their stories of great grief and sorrow , and all I can think of in this desperate mind of mine is....WHY CANT I DO THAT!?!?!lol

    sorry to waste your time.But you all are truely wise men.Sorry again.I dont want to spoil great minds.
     
  7. Xaltar

    Xaltar Faen Curunír

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    LOL thanks but I don't think wisdom has anything to do with it, just alot of reading archaic texts...
     
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    You make a very good point,but,yeah, I wouldnt call it wisdom more like life in general.which ever though thanks alot.
     
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    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    fine have it your way,"educated",wise men.And if one of yall dont make a book Im going to make it for you.No Joke:)
     
  10. Zidane

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    I'm getting there on the book thing I just need a little more time.
     
  11. Xaltar

    Xaltar Faen Curunír

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    Thanks :D
    I'm glad you like it, hey maybe a FF poetry book would be a good idea...
     
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    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Good Idea??Thats Brilliant!!(starting thread as we speak)LOL.No but realy good idea.I cant believe no ones done that yet.
     
  13. Zidane

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    FF poems?I don't know,sounds like they'd all sound the same.
     
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    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    true,true.But if we start them first theyed have to copy us.Im mean you.
     
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    Very nice, I enjoyed it too.
     
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    I don't know I try my hand at some FF poetry.This should be interesting.
     
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    Xaltar Faen Curunír

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    An idea is born, woe to the man who gets in the way ;)
     
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    Unless they're like Square Enix officials with a copyright.lol just joking.
     
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    Xaltar Faen Curunír

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    I meant a Fantasy Forum poetry book :D

    Sorry, just clicked you thought final fantasy.....
     
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    Oh that would make sense then.