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Discussion in 'Writing Workshop' started by Kai, Dec 15, 2008.

  1. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Yeah, i think i can do that :D And i'll definetly post it up once Winter break's over

    Do you think i could join in on the group project? If you say yes, what kind of stuff do i need to do to get involved?
     
  2. Kai

    Kai Dark Jedi Warrior

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    Sure you could join. Right now we are in the process of creating a character profile that we are going to follow. We are each going to work the line for that character, and eventually we will meet up. The basic storyline is four characters all looking for the samething (we don't know what yet). We are going to do more discussing after we discuss eachothers characters. The only reason we are going to do that is because we don't need two of the same characters.
     
  3. matthiasmouse

    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    yay kakashi is joining :) should we wait to discuss the personal characteristics when rar gets back?
     
  4. Kai

    Kai Dark Jedi Warrior

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    I think we should discuss our 3 character profiles, and make sure things are ok, then we will wait for his and then start. In the mean time, we'll work on making our ideas don't overlap.
     
  5. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    i can easily enough change this if its identical to anyone elses:


    Full Name: Rinaldi Amadeus the Third
    Species: Wilding (a humanoid race of the far North)
    Age: 24
    Occupation: Former blacksmith/ Wandering Solider of Fortune
    Hometown: Norvagen, an icy stronghold of the North.
    Skills: Skilled with a spear, his weapon of choice. His speed is better known than his stregnth, but both are formidable
    Likes: Watching the time pass
    Dislikes: Theives or liars of any kind, though he is exempt from neither sin
    Clothing: Iron platelegs and a sleeveless iron chainmail vest. A winged half-helm of gilded steel.
    Weapon(s) of choice: A long, mithril spear
    Traveling Group: None, yet shown
    Bio: Raised in the stronghold by his parents, who were later killed by a goblin tribe. He quit his work as a blacksmith to travel the plains. Little else is known.
    Physical Description:
    -Height: 6'11"
    -Weight: 203
    -Eye Color: An icy blue, as with most Wildings.
    -Hair Color: Flowing brown.
    -Notable Scars/Injuries: His left cheek is stratched with the claws of a Mountain Lion, and part of his left ear is missing from the same injury.
    -General Physical Ability: High
    *Psychological Description:
    Optimist/Pessimist: Optomist
    -Introvert/Extrovert: Extrovert
    -General Intelligence: Smart, yet nothing to brag about. His common sense is better than his more scholarly knoweldge.
    -General Attitude Toward Friends: Jolly, under most circumstances
    -General Attitude Toward Strangers: Same as above
    -Opinion of the World: There is nothing worse than a world you can't believe in.
    -Mental Endurance: Generally low
    -Favorite Quote(s): Feverth la Comedencia. An old wilding phrase of unknown meaning.
     
  6. Kai

    Kai Dark Jedi Warrior

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    Sweet Kakashi thats good, I will base my character profile on your format.
     
  7. Kakashi

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    alright, i look forward to seeing your profiles ^^
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    when should we have them up?
     
  9. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    i'm game for as soon as you all get em up, and i'm game to wait as well.
     
  10. Raraldor

    Raraldor Well-Known Member

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    hey guys I am on my iPod touch right now. I would have been on earlier,but I couldn't find a wireless hotspot lol. My character isn't completely done yet,but it is almost. I will put it up today if I can.
     
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    oh and nice to have you on board Kakashi :D
     
  12. Kakashi

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    nice to be aboard as well :)
     
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    Raraldor Well-Known Member

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    kai and matt filled you in right?
     
  14. Kakashi

    Kakashi The Fighters Guide House Member

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    yep, they sure did. Thanks.
     
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    ok cool. I am working on my character as we speak
     
  16. Kai

    Kai Dark Jedi Warrior

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    Full Name: Sasha Bineatzo
    Species: Dark Human (sub-species of Human, known for slight mutations)
    Age: 22
    Occupation: New Captain of a Pirate Ship
    Hometown: Port Asari
    Skills: Good with Cutlass's, daggers, poisons, and weak bits of dark and water elemental magic.
    Likes: Open sea, good crew men, liquor, treasure, and the stars.
    Dislikes: Stupid people, traitors, other pirates, and jerks.
    Clothing: Tight breeches and tight shirts, boots to her knees.
    Weapon(s) of choice: Cutlass or double cutlass's.
    Traveling Group: Her crew
    Bio: Raised on the sea by her father and her father's crew, has become captain of her ship the "Star Wake" which is the scourge of the Thedorin Sea.
    Physical Description:
    -Height: 5'7"
    -Weight: 130
    -Eye Color: Brownish-red
    -Hair Color: Black bobbed hair
    -Notable Scars/Injuries: Tattoo on right shoulder blade and lower back
    -General Physical Ability: High
    *Psychological Description:
    Optimist/Pessimist: Pessimist (realist)
    -Introvert/Extrovert: Introvert in Extrovert clothing
    -General Intelligence: Genius, great wisdom and street savy mixed.
    -General Attitude Toward Friends: She loves her crew, they are her only friends
    -General Attitude Toward Strangers: Doesn't trust anyone but her crew
    -Opinion of the World: It is her's for the taking
    -Mental Endurance: Mid-range
    -Favorite Quote(s): To rum and sea I pledge my blood and to death I ever sail
     
  17. Raraldor

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    full name: Raraldor Gennodel (I am good with names its just I like this name ^^)
    race: half-elf
    age: 103
    occupation: none
    hometown: never found out(his mother never told him,fearing he would want kill his father)
    weapon of choice: flaming scimitar
    armor: half plate and knights helm(darkened gold) and tower shield (gold)
    likes: wide-open spaces,his mother
    dislikes: inside/enclosed spaces,his father,theives,giants,goblin-folk
    hair color:jet black
    eye color: dark blue
    personality: realistic,a tad sadistic
    bio: Raraldor and his mother were exiled shortly after his birth due to his heritage.Being raised in a forest near no goodly race,Raraldor learned the language of the trees at age 7. Later Raraldor began to train as a druid,following the trees orders. Shortly after his mother was killed due to a goblin raid. Seeing the goblins burn down the forest and kill his mother,Raraldor swore revenge against everything that went wrong that brought them to this point.
     
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  18. Kai

    Kai Dark Jedi Warrior

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    OK so far so good, now we'll just wait for Matt, as far as I can tell we don't have any problem with the characters yet.
     
  19. Kakashi

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    yeah, nice profiles guys. So far- all are unique to each other (does that make sense?), so nice work.
     
  20. Raraldor

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    ty,and yes it does make sense XD I haven't seen matt on in a while. I wonder where he is. Anyway, my character is basically the opposite of me lol