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Discussion in 'Writing Workshop' started by Kai, Dec 15, 2008.

  1. Raraldor

    Raraldor Well-Known Member

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    yeah sure what do you need?
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    well i want the char to have 2 short swords, but i dont really like falchions (which is what i chose) and i was wonderin if u knew any other short swords that i could use?
     
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    Raraldor Well-Known Member

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    rapiers and scimitars are a good size,so are plain short swords XD. Rapiers are short thin blades normally good for stabbing
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    yea, the only problem i had with the rapier was that it strikes me as a weapon for the rich or just like a snobby explorer (lol) i really like scimitars tho, i think ill go with those :draught:
     
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    cool. Don't go for a flaming one though XD
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    aha yea dont worry :p i saw yours lol. wat would you call these? lol doesnt that look awesomehttp://starwarsrpg.pettycomp.net/Images/DualBladeSword.jpg
     
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    you know, I have always thought of a blade like that but I didn't know what to call them.It would be awsome to have one in a fight. Someone goes and does an overhead chop you place one of those in the way and is slides in XD. Then you twist the blade with enough force and snap your opponents weapon.
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    that'd be awesome!
     
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    indeed it would...where the heck is kai and kakashi ???
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    aha yea ino, i feel bad for being on so late
     
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    what time is it?? its only 2:00 here
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    nooo i mean like late in the week, like after u guys already had ur posts up, when i was gone. but i g2g for now, cya :) ill be on tonight
     
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    ok cool. And don't worry about that.
     
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    sorry about the delay guys- i wasn't able to get on this morning. I've decided to just completely revamp my character- so here it is:


    Full Name: Rinaldi Grange Placynski
    Species: Frost Dwarf
    Age: 184 (10 years= 1 human year)
    Occupation: Solider of Fortune
    Hometown: Wessleforge- a Dwarven mining stronghold of the far northern glaciers
    Skills: Skilled with a maul, his weapon of choice. His stregnth is near-legendary as well as his quick wit on the battle-field.
    Likes: Listening to the wind pass through the pines.
    Dislikes: Theives or liars of any kind, though he is exempt from neither sin
    Clothing: http://www.alturasforums.com/stuff/ironbreaker.jpg as shown, minus helmet, for rinaldi wears no helm.
    Weapon(s) of choice: A mithril maul
    Traveling Group: None, yet shown
    Bio: Raised as a blacksmith, though he left his family at a young age to wander the plains- as was his 'destiny'
    Physical Description:
    -Height: 4'5"
    -Weight: 165
    -Eye Color: An icy blue
    -Hair Color: the same icy blue as his eyes.
    -Notable Scars/Injuries: A large scar can me seen on the tip of his chin, given to him by an Orkish spear.
    -General Physical Ability: Quite High
    *Psychological Description:
    Optimist/Pessimist: Pessimist
    -Introvert/Extrovert: Introvert
    -General Intelligence: Smart, yet nothing to brag about. His common sense is better than his more scholarly knowledge.
    -General Attitude Toward Friends: Jolly, under most circumstances
    -General Attitude Toward Strangers: Not immediately trusting.
    -Opinion of the World: There is nothing worse than a world you can't believe in.
    -Mental Endurance: Average
    -Favorite Quote(s): Let the snow run red with the blood of the goblin-kin!
     
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    cool. Nice armor ^^. I am now not the oldest of the group. So what made you want to revamp your character completely?
     
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    heh, i just wasn't feeling it too fully. i think i rushed a bit on it, tbh.
     
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    ok well I hope you are happier with this one.
     
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    hah, i'm much more of a dwarf than a wilding :D
     
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    lol cool. hope kai gets on then we can start our writing ^^
     
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    nice character :) and really cool set of gear there :)