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  1. matthiasmouse

    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    ok sorry about all of that, my dad decided to have a last minute trip :mad: lol. ill have my profile up in a sec, sorry for being gone, i didnt really have a notice
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    *full name: Tristyn
    *race: Kyron (mystical human race said to be extinct. Not much is known about them)
    *gender: male
    *age: 28
    *occupation: rogue, assassin. sometimes thief
    *hometown: Sorion (only known city of Kyron. City currently in ruins)
    *Bio:Taken as a slave during an invasion at a very young age, it was this invasion that caused destruction of the Kyron race. Escaped swiftly due to clever planning. Leads a life of quiet and solitude. Drifter. Travel from city to city looking for odd jobs or doing basic stealing from local businesses. Known affiliations with groups of bandits and thieves. Few know what Tristyn looks like due to the white bandana that covers his face.
    *skills: skilled at close combat, good knowledge of puzzles, and stealth. climbing. fast thinker
    *abilities: to augment weapon with an elemental (fire, ice, electricity, air/wind) blast with each swing or thrust- not quite a master yet, cannot exercise full use of power without proper training
    *weapon of choice: two short swords. seldom use of a kris
    *armor: black hood/cape. Black chest piece/leggings/gloves/boots. White Bandana in contrast with black clothes. Primarily leather, or lightweight materials
    *likes: silence, and solitude. Dark or nature oriented places. Danger. Music
    *dislikes: obnoxious or loud individuals. Un-organization. Help from others.
    **Physical Description
    -hair color: black
    -eye color: bluish/ white, seem to glow during use of special ability^^
    -height: 5’11
    -weight: 149 pounds
    -Notable scars/injuries: artistic seeming group of scars on back across the shoulders. scars have a bluish/white glow to them
    -general physical ability: high
    **psychological
    - -Introvert/Extrovert: Introvert
    -General Intelligence: Uses cunning and wit. Experiences shape actions and ideas
    -General Attitude Toward Friends: has no real friends
    -General Attitude Toward Strangers: untrusting. Skeptical. Hard for a stranger to earn his trust
    -Opinion of the World: cruel and unfair
    -Mental Endurance: medium. Depending on circumstance
    -Miscellaneous: often has horrid nightmares
    *Motto: It is better to live life for yourself, rather than trying to please the world around you.



    please tell me if i forgot anything or if its too close to anyones. or if you have any questions/ suggestions
     
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    Raraldor Well-Known Member

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    alright cool. And don't worry about being gone for that time. We should be able to start our story soon ^^
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    i liked all your profiles btw :) it seems like were all different
     
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    Raraldor Well-Known Member

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    yeah these characters all seem different. Mine and Kakashi's are a little the same but thats okay
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    i think you guys are fine, plenty different :) looks like youll be the old one of the group :p
     
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    lol at least I have a tower sheild and a flaming scimitar XD
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    ahahaha those are awesome :) o and being a druid, will u turn into animals?
     
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    maybe XD haven't decided yet. On one hand it will be really cool to turn into a bear and eat my enemies, but I think it would make him to powerful. On NWN once I played as a shifter and anytime I couldn't kill something as myself I just changed into a minotaur and kicked the crap out of it ^^
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    aha thats awesome, but yea i think it'd be cool to turn into sumthin :)
     
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    aspecially a bird that way I can spy on enemies w/p getting easily caught.
     
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    ^^ good idea lol. this is gonna be sweet. i have that augment thing, u change form, kai has dark/water magic, and kakashi has speed i think it was
     
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    yeah but I am not exactly sure if I want my guy to change form yet. Look at the bio and he hasn't exactly completed his training lol
     
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    haha true, maybe in the story, he can get better at it
     
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    maybe, lol what does his augment look like??
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    well its not permanent. its just like a blast or shock of it upon will. like if he does ice --> ice will run up the blade and lash out in the designated direction.
     
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    o ok thats pretty cool. Kai made a woman,which will be a challenge for him,mine is the opposite of myself and idk about your or kakashi's characters XD. Was there a reason for making them the way they are?
     
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    well for me, my character is kinda like me. its also the type of character that i admire most (kinda). but i also just like rogues, or lone people
     
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    ok cool. Kakashi needs to answer this too to satify my curiousity XD
     
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    matthiasmouse training for alchemist

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    haha. hey do u think u can help me out with my char for a sec?