Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by I. R. Shogun, Apr 16, 2009.
Didn't turn out great, but I'm trying to move this into the high drama section as fast as I can
It'll be a while before I get another one up, I'm a bit swamped right now
Short, but effective. LOL, What? the villain didn't keep his promise? I lol'ed when Matt was suprised that Gimmick set the bombs off early...he's a villain...it's not in the job description to be trustworthy.
No problem. Been awhile since I've been online, not enough hours in a day, so it's understandable. Draws out the suspense...lol.
lol well it won't be like most times when I get busy and just quit, I'm too damn close to the end to stop altogether, but I've got a lot of reading these days
I don't care how long it takes....but if you quit this far into it...I might be a little, little being the operative word, pissed...lol. Cause that would be one hell of a cliffhanger
I'll probably get an update up tomorrow, but I'll be skipping some chapters to help get me motivated
Good stuff, an interesting look into their thoughts and values. And Gimmick has caught on eh? This is only going to get even more interesting now that Karen is the focus of Gimmick's attention....dun dun dun. Things will start to piece together now since previous "flashbacks" told of how Karen had been held captive during the main event.
I'm making my hiatus from this one official, I'm looking to get it fully done during winter break since I'll have nothing but time then. This will help me work on the project I decided to begin working on last night
Very attention grabbing and well-written. I was just on here looking for inspiration for my own story and I stumbled across this. Definitely a gem that is worthy of publication in some form. Good work, man.
Hah thanks for the compliments, maybe someday I'll bother to finish it, along with the dozens of other works I've only half finished or barely started round here
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