Masque: Of Heroes and Hellions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by I. R. Shogun, Apr 16, 2009.

  1. Dragn9

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    I really liked the message behind this, it was very well written and thought-provoking.
     
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    I feel it's a super hero story's duty to explore the nature of right and wrong and really have that question be at the fore front, hopefully I'll do a good job of showing that not all of the heroes have the same thoughts on why they do it and what makes it okay to do it
     
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    That was an awesome update. Gimmick finally makes another appearance and he is definately making the hero's job incredibly difficult. He's proved that he is very cunning but also that he is not just all brains and talk but that he's got skills to back them up.
     
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    It's only gonna get better...
     
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    I have really missed your writing! I really have keep it up, hun!
     
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    At least the heroes were able to land what....two hits? Man, the build up to the final battle is awesome! The random clues being left behind by Gimmick is cool....trying to figure out what they mean...not so cool...lol.
     
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    They'll get easier to figure out, although the big mystery may not until the third clue...
     
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    no update this week, I'm not feelin it right now, if I suddenly get struck with inspiration I'll get something up bu right now it's looking like it'll be a few days
     
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    Wow this is really good all though it is slightly cliched in parts lol...but we all like abit of that :D
     
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    Update by update we get closer to "THE" Event...the suspense is awesome. The way the vigilante's encounters with Gimmick are going it's hard to believe that he will eventually be taken down.
     
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    I think the cliched parts are more than just slight lol

    And yeah, the final battle's gonna be fun
     
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    try to have an update soon
     
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    Awesome, this is moving along nicely. That whole broadcast was a very "V" thing to do and it was cool. Gimmick's "machine" sounds interesting, seems to play a major role in the event, looking forward to how this all plays out.
     
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    Yeah, I needed to get this updated, and I couldn't move myself to write a good action sequence, so I decided to just get two of the crimes taken care of at once
     
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    It took me close to 10 minutes reading the first chapter so I'm stopping there for now. Great work though :) I liked the flashback sequence, clever.
     
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    Thanks. It's not quite what I'd hoped to make it, but part of that has to do with the long break i had to take cause of my computer