Lost in a world og Demons

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  1. Zidane

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    Lost in a world of Demons

    Where do angels lose their way?
    A place where the light can't reach?
    A place where they can shed their halos,
    And become as if human,
    It's sad when an angel deserves to die,
    But so many are lost,
    I shed a tear of crimson for each one,
    For I've known many,
    Missguided by darkness,
    They ignore the truth they once loved,
    Such sorrow I feel for them,
    I know this for I am one,
    This I say to any that will heed my words,
    Do not stray from the light,
    The fall from Grace is harder then you think,
    And surviving hurts more then the fall,
    Thus I wonder searching for the light,
    A tormented angel,
    Lost in a world of demons.

    Any comments?
    Sorry misspelled the title:Lost in a world of Demons
     
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  2. LadyoftheGoldenWood

    LadyoftheGoldenWood Well-Known Member

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    that almost mad me cry! what inspired you to wright it?
     
  3. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    My life,thats the inspiration for all of my poetryI'm sorry it almost made you cry,I kinda feel bad about it.
     
  4. gohekan

    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    I have a feeling you and I ,Zidane, are very similair.I once had a time in my life when I prayed and worshiped everyday.But now I sleep in the day and wake in the night.I dont know what realy drove me to this , prison of darkness and hatred , but I do know is that I am a fallen warrior of the light.
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    The fiend with all his comrades
    Fell then from heaven above,
    Through as long as three nights and days,
    The angels from heaven into hell;
    And them all the Lord transformed to devils,
    Because they his deed and word
    Would not revere"
    Caedmon, Creation: The Fall of
    the Rebel Angels (C.A.D. 670

    :jawa:
     
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  5. Zidane

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    Nice to know I'm not fighting alone anymore.
     
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    PenguinofDeath The name says it all.

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    *applaudes* Very nice, good job! :)
     
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    Thanks very much!
     
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    Re: Lost in a world of Demons

    Very good...love the imagery...
     
  9. Zidane

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    you guys are to kind!
     
  10. gohekan

    gohekan The Fighters Guide House Member

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    They are right.You truely have a way with words.
     
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    thanks everyone.
     
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    Nono.. thank YOU. ;) <3
     
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    no no no you missunderstand THANK YOU.