I sing the storm

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  1. Dystopia Eternal

    Dystopia Eternal The Windbringer

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    I sing the storm

    A steady rhythm on the roof
    the constant falling rain
    thunder rolling in the distance
    I hear tonight’s refrain

    There’s rain on the window
    it’s running down the glass
    teardrops falling from the sky-
    they’ve reached the ground at last.

    Wind rushing through the trees
    a peaceful, calming sound
    flickers of light in the sky
    the clouds in lighting, crowned

    One didn’t fall

    Something’s missing in the song
    something isn’t right-
    it makes me wonder what is wrong
    up in the sky, tonight.

    There’s rain on the window
    it’s running down the glass
    teardrops falling from the sky-
    they’ve reached the ground at last.

    Now I know what’s wrong here
    in my concert hall
    it’s strange that it makes a difference
    but one drop didn’t fall.

    Angel in heaven

    Waiting in the maelstrom
    lonely in the clouds
    an angel afraid of the world
    you hide behind grey shrouds

    There’s rain on the window
    it’s running down the glass
    teardrops falling from the sky-
    they’ve reached the ground at last.

    I see you falling slowly,
    a shining pearl enthralls
    now the rain’s song is over-
    now the last drop falls

    No rain on the window
    the storm is now long past
    nothing falling from the sky
    you’ve reached the ground at last.
     
  2. PenguinofDeath

    PenguinofDeath The name says it all.

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    LOVE LOVE LOVE! Great job! :)
     
  3. LadyoftheGoldenWood

    LadyoftheGoldenWood Well-Known Member

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    thant is by far one of he best I have read on here!!
     
  4. Fingon

    Fingon The High King

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    Indeed very well written. *bows*
    ~Fingon
     
  5. Sorcha

    Sorcha Moderator Staff Member

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    Beautiful :)
     
  6. Radagast

    Radagast Art House Member

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    Man, your an amazing fantasy writer/poet. Keep it up dude *thumbs up*.