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  1. PoisonRose52388

    PoisonRose52388 look deep within the rose

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    yeah he's pne of draculas first and is around draculas age so i figured that their power was some what equal because of the age...bad idea??
     
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    Meteorain Magical & Mystical

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    Yea....bad idea.

    I'm not saying people cannot challenge Dracula...it just seems a bit weird that Dracula would lose, if you know what I mean. Personally...I don't like the idea of Dracula being killed by a lesser vampire that's all. You could just say that he forced him into a millenia long slumber (since vamps sleep for ages for some reason), and that's why he's king now, or whatever.
     
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    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    Packed in ice. There's a few sci-fi films that mention that. There was a specific word for it but I can't remember it. They use it in the Alien films.
    Another idea is that somehow Dracula is banished to an alternate realm, or put into a coma, or frozen...whatever, anyway Dracula is removed from his position. And Danior takes his place, so it is up to somebody to destroy Danior and put Dracula back to restore the balance of things. Although I don't know why that would be good, only that if there's somebody who wants to be like Dracula, he really has a problem. Mentally.
     
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    PoisonRose52388 look deep within the rose

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    ok but in this story, i donno if i'll make a sequal, dracula is banished or whatever becaus he wants the world for him self. like danior
     
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    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    But if Dracula and Danior both want the same thing, then wouldn't they make an alliance? Then they could work together. Unless something goes wrong, or course.
     
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    Carline of Crydee Beyond eternity

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    But if they both want the power and they don't want to share it, it makes sense.
     
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    PoisonRose52388 look deep within the rose

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    Danior thinks of himself and nothing else. him and dracula both want the world and danior wants it for himself
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    Story Update: With all your help and seggestions you've all halped me get up to page 13. for me thats a big accoplishment.Thanks All now i know where to go when i get stuck and need a nudge.;)
     
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    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    You put all that in just 13 pages?
     
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    PoisonRose52388 look deep within the rose

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    yeah is that a bad thing?? to short or to long??
     
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    Carline of Crydee Beyond eternity

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    No, it's good :)
     
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    PoisonRose52388 look deep within the rose

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    thanks i am working on making it a noval. problem is i donno anything about getting it out there in stores. i guess i should ask my english professior when collage starts. i like to read and i enjoy long chapters. i know i am an odd one. and there is so much i want to put in it.
     
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    You might want to add in more details to lengthen the 13 pages, not that its bad, but you could make it longer. Also, if you seriously want to publish it, send in a sample to some publishers.
     
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    TO add to that last comment, if you're really intent on getting a publisher, I'd suggest finishing at least the rough draft, then polishing up the first chapter untill you can't bear it (they usually want the first chapter, rather than a random sample), and make sure it's you BEST, because you need to impress on your first shot. Socondly, you'll need to find an agent first, and if they like your work, THEN they'll suggest it to a publisher, etc etc. If you'd like more info I can help as I can, I know a little about this sort of thing, as I've studied the process for my own novel in the making.
     
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    PoisonRose52388 look deep within the rose

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    thanks for your advice
     
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    Borael Prophet of Arka

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    just wanted to say good luck with the publishing thing, never let anyone say that you can't do it because you never know sometimes!
     
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    thanks, i finished the first chapter and needed a brake and well i should be going back to it soon and polishing abit then starting the second chapter. who knows the people i send it to might shorten it
     
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    Has anyone in this thread seen the movie Underworld?!
     
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    :confused: does it sound like it? i was trying to get it not to sound like it.:confused:
     
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    Well, some parts are different, but that's still cool. I just read the first page when I posted that...
     
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    ok now i am on the second chapter and fixing the first chapter.
     
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