Hey Star Wars fans!

Discussion in 'Star Wars' started by Gemizonian Leader, Aug 31, 2006.

  1. Gemizonian Leader

    Gemizonian Leader New Member

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    Hey Star Wars fans, I am about to create a Star Wars story that will not only involve the Star Wars galaxy, but also the Milky Way galaxy as well.

    Also, the main character is...me! There will be also other characters in story as well, but 4 new races will be in the story:

    1. Gemizonians

    Description: Formed by just one teenager, this race became a favorite to Earth, making people come from the African, North and South American, and European continents. The leader of the Gemizonian Republic is named Sean McKibben.

    2. Iridion

    Description: The Iridion are a force to be reckoned with because, although the Iridion lost the first 2 battles, they never gave up on destroying Earth, the home planet of the Gemizonians. The leader of the Iridion is the Mainframe.

    3. Boshlevik Empire

    Description: The Boshlevick Empire was founded by just one Jedi named Kevin. When Kevin was on a mission to find out what was going on, on the planet, Boshlevick. They also have a new type of Lightsaber battler, the Sidi. The leader's name of the Empire is Kevin.

    4. Republic of Boshlevik

    Description: The Republic of Boshlevick is rebellion against the Boshlevik Empire. It started at the same time the Empire conquered the planet, Corasaunt (Don't know how to spell the planet's name). The leader of the Republic of Boshlevik is named Rastuke.

    Well, what do you guys and gals think of the descriptions of the new races?
     
  2. Cascador

    Cascador Who's Anakin?

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    better search more original names, like Iridion...there's already a race in star wars called the iridonian
     
  3. Mububban

    Mububban Administrator Staff Member

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    And is the Boshlevik Empire supposed to be a mixup of the Bolshevik Empire? ie Russia?
     
  4. Gemizonian Leader

    Gemizonian Leader New Member

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    Ya, but the Iridion are from these video games: 'Iridion 3-D', 'Iridion II', and 'Nanostray'.
     
  5. Foinikas

    Foinikas Playing backgammon!

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    Communists against the Empire? Stalin or Vader?
     
  6. Gemizonian Leader

    Gemizonian Leader New Member

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    The Boshlevik are actually like a Dictatorship, and the Gemizonians are like a Republic. The Iridion are just war/planet hungry.
     
  7. Storm Eagle

    Storm Eagle Master of the Ninja Guild

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    You should all stop giving him a hard time. If done correctly and not done as bad as recent Star Wars novels, this could turn out well.

    Note from a forum writer: Don't make anything too coincidential. That just bores the audience to death.
     
  8. lewy

    lewy Lewy the lethal lunatic!

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    oh, surprize, surprize:p lol, well... uhmm... i don't know, post a story, and i'll be able to reply:D
     
  9. Jingojolene

    Jingojolene Wayfarer, heartlander

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    I think it's interesting that you've mixed our world with the star wars galaxy and I think that instead of focusing on races just on Earth, perhaps create more races on planets elsewhere in the galaxy? That'd be real interesting. :) Oh, and I definitely agree with Storm Eagle.
     
  10. Nynaeve

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    That really made me laugh! :D
     
  11. Greybeard

    Greybeard Geezer

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    Is there a difference? Well, Vader was a snappier dresser.
     
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    JIM zombie Turncoat

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    if you set it in the legacy era it could work