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  1. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    I wrote a few more...see if you can guess the theme in each one. In each poem, there is something in it that is to do with me. It's quite hard to spot.

    Helm's Hill

    From the top of Helm's Hill you can see the world
    Every mountain and valley
    Every drop of rain
    All that shall make you alive

    So fly, my unicorn
    On wings of gold
    To the distant galaxies of wisdom
    And if you return
    You will see me here
    Waiting on this lonely hill

    The glorious sight that beholds all creation
    If only you could see it as well
    For this is the place
    That will lift you sky-high
    The summit up high on Helm's Hill
     
  2. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    L.A. Zombie

    Dead man walking down the streets of LA
    He doesn't know his mind
    And he doesn't know his life
    Stumbling, falling, another step to hell
    Following in the steps of a Second Messiah

    So tell me, karma girl, when were you ever dead?
    And did you find your way, and did you ever wake up?
    It's twenty past five and you won't hear a soul
    Lose yourself
    One more time
    Mind
    Destroying
    Zombie
    Soldier
    Man


    Forest of the Elves

    Underneath the ageless tree I watched the sky disappear
    As the night approached and the elves came out
    Out of their secret forest, their haven from evil
    Singing tales of glory and honoour, and playing together as one
    I listened to their music, their hour's paradise
    Kept my eyes on the darkness but my skin weak and taut
    A raindrop brushes my cheek, the clouds obscured the sky
    And I turned around, I saw the elves had gone
    Gone back into their forest, their trees all blessed with magic
    The clouds withdrew, the sky returned, the sun came out to shine at me
    Never had it hurt so much before
     
  3. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    Stare at Your Soul

    A human soul can only be so human
    Look inside yourself and see the compassion, the kindness, the happiness
    All desperate to fight their way into the open
    Stare into the eyes of your demonic side
    Through the eyes of a raging frenzy
    Glass reflection
    You see glass reflection
    Smash the glass
    Smash your soul
    Consume your soul forever, devour everything that was ever human
    Now look again, inside what remains
    Stare at your soul
     
  4. bloodfiredeath

    bloodfiredeath Die by the Sword

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    Hey Wing Rider, I think you should post some of your bands lyrics up, I would be interested to have a look see!
     
  5. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    What? These are poems! :D
     
  6. bloodfiredeath

    bloodfiredeath Die by the Sword

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    Yeah I know, perhaps there should be a lyrics written by me thread? but after seeing your work, I was interested in how your lyrics would sound, if they are similar or more evil!
     
  7. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    LOL, my song lyrics are mostly like epic power metal stuff, it's just my poems that are evil evil evil...haha.
    Here's more!


    Dawn of Raging Steel

    This is the dawn of raging steel
    The crash of heavy metal
    Come forward, unbeliever! Uncouth heretic, kneel!
    A new age is dawning for us all!
    Smash apart your fire staff
    And let me raze your mind
    With glorious visions of epic futures
    The music coming into this world
    The words pouring out of this page
    Your head will not want to take it
    You may even go mad
    Yet you cannot close your ears to this
    The dawn of raging steel


    Omnipotent

    The arrogant king, great lord and master
    Creator of anything, star or war
    He stood above the universe
    A staff of blazing light crossing his heart
    Power radiating from his fiery orbs, his eyes
    Master of everything

    Yes, once there were many like him
    Where have they all gone?
    They could have made a difference
    They could have made a better world

    If you look towards the stars at night
    You may catch a faint glimmer far away
    Sign of the king, the great ruler of all
    The greatest that there ever will be
    Imagine what you could do
    Imagine what you would create
    Imagine the rise to power
     
  8. Roland

    Roland Go Horse's Go

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    I like your use of emotive language, also how you have given the poems interesting structures makes them quite good aswell, good work!
     
  9. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    Thanks for the feedback. Another one here:


    The Perfect Day

    What is your idea of a perfect day?
    A time when everything seems to be going your way?
    Hail the creature that was born in a sea of gold
    For that animal will never feel pain
    Never feel sadness, never feel misery
    Only joy and happiness remain, the greatness aroused
    In storms of fire and ice
    Everything you want shall be yours

    Another idea of a perfect day?
    A time when you discovered something unseen
    Never before revealed to the world
    A planet of death, a potion of life
    The cure to cancer, a water that burns
    In the name of the new era that shall arise
    Whilst spaceships appear, and mother earth descends
    Speeding up the apocalypse
    For death to claim all

    Do you have another idea of a perfect day?
    Soldier of war, defeating enemies all round?
    Delighting in killing, beheading and stabbing
    Your mind soon corrupted, bloodlust alight
    Even surrounded, you shall not yield
    In battle they train you to never surrender
    And your doom will settle
    With grim certainty

    But one more idea of a perfect day
    Could it be that life's torments and tortures
    Miseries and horrors
    Could it be that they just stop?
    Just for a few seconds?
    Or for a whole day
    A perfect day
     
  10. Borael

    Borael Prophet of Arka

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    wow you right good storys and poems. The multitalented Wing Rider!
     
  11. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    Cool, thanks. I can play the guitar too. :D:D
     
  12. Carline of Crydee

    Carline of Crydee Beyond eternity

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    They're really, really, really good, Wing! :)
     
  13. BBallForLife

    BBallForLife New Member

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    Great job. Keep posting.
     
  14. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    Alright, some more:

    Pyromaniac

    Two wooden sticks, side by side
    Rub them together, grinding grinding
    Firelight alive, sparkling up once
    Licks the wood and leaps up and down
    Burning smells of fire

    Burning, burning
    I can see it coming
    Burning, burning
    Nothing will survive
    Burning, burning
    I can see the sun at last
    Burning, burning
    Purify your soul!

    Devour the trees, darling flame
    Turn them all to ash
    I see red and orange, rapidly turning to black
    Nothing signifies
    Fire purifies
    Let it consume you through

    Burning, burning
    I can feel it feeding
    Burning, burning
    Nothing left alive
    Burning, burning
    Leaving just the sun for last
    Burning, burning
    PURIFY YOUR SOUL!


    Mystic Plague

    The black disease is spreading all over the country
    It will take you too and rip you apart
    Everywhere you go, the micro-organisms are breeding
    A frenzy overpowering, addictive and feeding
    You have the disease too, although you haven’t noticed yet
    I recognised the symptoms, and you don’t stand a chance
    Within the hour it shall begin and you’ll be begging to die
    And that’s why I’m standing at your side with a razor-sharp knife
    I’m only here to help you
    Believe me


    Your Third Hand

    Look at your hands and tell me what you see
    You cannot look deep within, not whilst you try to think too much
    Do you see a third hand, sprouted in between?
    Never will you see it
    Never will you fight it
    It shall keep your secrets for you

    Your third hand is your heart
    And it can deal out pain
    A single blow can shatter feelings
    A single flick can hurt
    Protruding from your chest
    Do you not see your soul?
    Reflected in your third hand
    A mirror on the wall

    Some of us will never recognise ourselves
    For what we truly are


    Food of the Dead

    Dine until you die
    The richest of foods, the most exotic of qualities
    Touch of pomegranate seeds, sliding down your tongue
    Fruit of the harvest
    Taste of the rain
    Bitter and blessed is the food of the dead

    Time to dine
    Eat, peasant, to your heart’s pleasure
    For in this world, the food shall not be consumed and lost
    But it will always be here
    On this high banquet table of the king of kings
    Reforming before your foolish and ignorant eyes

    Stay, peasant, and dine
    You will eat at this table for the rest of your miserable life
    Watch the food, I say –
    Watch it well
     
  15. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    Here's one I'm especially proud of.

    Demon War

    The Demon Lord has risen out of his grave!
    Master of chaos approaching, legions of demons
    Spreading across the distant skies
    A dragon of ice is rising
    A lord of a kingdom is dying
    Organise now, before we are caught unawares
    Is there still hope?

    Rise!
    Rise, from the ashes of a thirteenth leucrotta!
    Hear my voice, ringing out amongst your swords
    The symphony of the last phoenix
    With the eye of a shadow
    The mouth of a star
    And the claw of a ghost
    You shall create new life to combat the demons
    To destroy the Demon Lord one more time

    Look through the eyes of a unicorn
    See blazing nightfire, all surrounding
    Surrounding the armies of good and evil as one
    He has come
    The King has come, all hail the King!

    Battlefield of eternity – this very place
    Where soldiers shall die, demons shall perish
    The forces of magic combined
    To fight for your lives and your future
    As the Demon Lord steps through the darkness
    And the mighty dragon of ice screams its battle-cry
    To vanquish its nemesis forever

    Weakened by dragonfire, the Demon Lord falls
    His armies dwindle, defeated at last
    The dragon of ice returns to its home in the stars
    And the tales remain all though the years
    Becoming legends of old, stories of glory
    You will tell them to your descendants, and pass it down
    Every detail, every word
    As the great King strides away into the fiery sun
    Into the fiery sun
     
  16. Árëlin Milloway

    Árëlin Milloway Toast Tiger

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    You got some really good poems! -But I especially liked this one :) - Don't really know why I liked this soo much better than the other once, but this one really creeped me out... (good thing) -It did kind of remind me of The masque of the red death - by Edgar Allan Poe (If you haven't read it: read it! -Creepy!) And I really liked the end.... Believe me...
    -Well done! -Keep writing! :D
     
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  17. BBallForLife

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    I agree. It was chilling...And that’s why I’m standing at your side with a razor-sharp knife!

    (Shivers)
     
  18. Wing Rider

    Wing Rider Psychotic Cybernetica

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    Haha, I thought that was a nice touch. Some of my poems are kind of frightening. But some other more recent ones are pretty nice.