harry potter and the secret wizard tower

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  1. golden dragon

    golden dragon New Member

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    i was thinking about making an harry potter mixed lotr script,
    this is where i need your help to make this script more detailed:

    After Harry and Ron had disscovered a secret wizards tower after listening secretly about the tower they went straight to speak to Legolas and talk to him about the tower.
    Legolas had been secretly annoyed after knowing dubledor is his only son and he has not been told about the secret tower.

    Snape, Legolas's cousin was very intensed about it he had given Harry and Ron a smirk.
    "I cant believe dumbledor is a dark wizard" Ron said in a confused voice,
    "what about if gandolf was going about to be asked to join?" said Ron straight after they went out of the castle...



    in that 2 paragraphs cud u tell me what to change? :sitonsmil
     
  2. Alchemist

    Alchemist The Fighters Guide House Member

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    Yeah, pay more attention in your english class.
     
  3. DazaRulz

    DazaRulz The Aussie Soccer Team

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    i dont know but that is sooooooooooo kooky man!!!

    its cool too.

    he he 'after listening secretly about the tower they went straight to speak to Legolas'
    he he so funny he he

    lol
    lol
    lol