Hands of the Gods

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  1. trazzberry1

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    This is part 1 of the first book in a several book series i'm writing called the Hands of the Gods. This is a pretty rough copy, but I'm in the process of revising right now and could use some help. I hope you enjoy it, and I'd appreciate any criticism or comments you might have! I know it's pretty long just to review but I would really appreciate any feedback about any of the book at all, even if you only read a page or two. Thanks!
     

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