Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by I. R. Shogun, Sep 11, 2007.
Wow, thanks to all those explanations in the story and in your first post I even understood what this was all about. Seems like a very Firi-friendly story, if you ask me.
And quite interesting as well, just the stuff I like. Not to mention the main characters...
Good story I.R.
yeah, I figured not everyone was going to know what the hell a gundam was, and the setting and character descriptions I put up to make sure people who weren't familiar with the series(es) knew about the important plot elements, and for the characters, well, I tend to forget to give info on characters in stories, so that's important. And yeah, I figured you'd like the central characters
also, just to be sure people who aren't familiar with gundam get a good idea, these are the two gundams that inspired Sever and Burner with some changes(most notable being weaponry and Burner not having those goofy wings on it's back), but these give a good idea:
nice. can't wait for the next installment
awesome! but sadly i can't read it right now. I have to go to dinner and i don't have enough time. but i'm SURE it's good
lol, it's mostly a character establishing chapter to set up for tomorrow's installment(provided I get it finished tomorrow) which will be a fight scene to demonstrate more of what Sever can do
Okay, I got sick of learning and read the last few parts instead. It's pretty fascinating how you're able to explain new features like that Buster suit without making the story boring - I just thought that might be worth mentioning.
And Bauer was a jerk. I'm so glad he got pwnt.
lol, well most of the Earth forces aren't supposed to be that villainous, but yeah, he was meant to be hateable, Benoit will be too.and thanks for the compliment Firi, hopefully I'll be able to keep it interesting through out
Hm, I'm not quite sure what to think of Captain Lat... Pretty badass, but at least not as arrogant as Bauer. ^^
Captain Lat is probably going to be one of the more interesting characters as I go on, and of everyone that's currently an enemy of Leron and Sarg he's easily the most dangerous. Also, there may not be an update today, but there will definitely be one tomorrow.
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