Given and Denied...

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by RayCaptain, May 3, 2013.

  1. RayCaptain

    RayCaptain 如朱

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    I'm just dying to be, what I can never be,
    You'll never see what it is that's inside of me,
    The part of me that I hold so close,
    That special place where no one knows...

    Who I am, who I could be one fateful day,
    No matter how many hateful things they do or say,
    This part of me, oh you'll never see,
    What I am, none of you, will ever be...

    Through the mountain tops and valleys low,
    I will live, I'll survive, just thought that you should know,
    And I know, that all the days go by,
    Just like the stars stretch across this sky...

    This secret side, my wounded hide,
    I'll never tell how many tears I cried,
    Where were you when I was on my knees,
    In a place I thought I would never be...

    Was your head in the clouds, were on cloud nine,
    Don't ask me now, no I'll be just fine,
    When I was on my own, was all alone,
    I forgot everything that was ever known...

    All the laughs, all the lies,
    Whispered words, shifting eyes,
    You all abandoned me here, now you're gone,
    But I won't ask where I went wrong...

    And though they'll never see this, there's something more,
    A closeness, a touch, what is it that you're looking for,
    Because I promise you all, I swear it now,
    That I'll forgive every slight, I'll do it somehow...

    All the friends who left me for dead,
    Knifes in their hands, dripping red,
    Over time, the wounds they'll heal,
    And the love I feel, is still oh so real...

    No spite do I hold for any of them,
    Each and everyone I really love them,
    But now, more than then, no one will ever see,
    This holy, special, the very best part of me...
     
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  2. Moo Guru

    Moo Guru New Member

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    v7 l2, word missing at the end? other than that, cool ;)
     
  3. RayCaptain

    RayCaptain 如朱

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    Ah... Quite right .-.;

    How strange... Thanks ^_^