FF8 Fan Fiction

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  1. pinchy

    pinchy Final Fantasy Dark Lord

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    right i said i'd do it and i've started.... however, my imagination starting to draw blank... and thats only after one paragraph. :stupid:

    any idea for the story guys?

    This is my opening paragraph

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    By Christopher Pinchbeck


    The wind raged against the garden gate disturbing the simple silence. The irritable constant banging causing him raise his left as if it where on a forever watch for the menace. The night wore on dragging the figure into thought of where the creature would strike from. The woods he thought, gazing into the dark overgrowth beyond the gate, his blond hair blowing around by the gusty wind and a smile rose on his scared face, “no”, he said quietly to himself; that would be too easy for a creature of these sorts he assured himself. Crack, snap and then silence, the wind had died down and now there was only the wiry quiet. The garden gate stopped banging and his eye’s scanned the surroundings. Where would it come for he wondered?





    well what do you's think?
     
  2. AcrobaticHippo

    AcrobaticHippo Determined

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    Okay,good,it keeps the reader interested.Once you have completed your fanfiction please post a link
     
  3. pinchy

    pinchy Final Fantasy Dark Lord

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    ok so no idea then jnanee .... im stuck!!!!.... usually have a class imagination
     
  4. AcrobaticHippo

    AcrobaticHippo Determined

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    Want me to edit it a bit for you?I see that your vocab needs some polishing
     
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    AcrobaticHippo Determined

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    The howling squall raged against the garden gate,interrupting the silence which pierced through the night. The constant banging of the garden gate annoyed him greatly.He ground his pearly white teeth,muttering in frustration. The ebony sky of the night seemed to last forever.He was uncertain as to where the creature would strike from. The woods he thought, gazing into the dark dense tundra beyond the gate, his blond hair tousled by the gusty wind and a smile rose on his scared face, “no”, he murmered; "That would be too easy for a creature of these sorts," he assured himself. A few twigs and branches snapped and crunched under his strong,pitch-black boots.The wind had died down and now there was only the soothing and calm quiet. The garden gate stopped banging and his eyes scanned the horizon. "Where would it come from?" he mused to himself.









    How does it sound>BTW,why don't you give the story a title?
     
  6. pinchy

    pinchy Final Fantasy Dark Lord

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    firstly it isnt squall i'm talking about, secondaly thats accuall alot better then my effert, and thirdly next time i'm acually going to have to re-read what i put
     
  7. AcrobaticHippo

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    Well,excuuuuse me,do you even know what squall means?It means a strong wind!I know it's Seifer you're talking about!Look up the meaning of squall in the dictionary!
     
  8. Bahamuth

    Bahamuth The Dark Raver

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    Mmm, I'm writing a little story, but it's already 13 pages long, so it would take to much time to post it.
     
  9. pinchy

    pinchy Final Fantasy Dark Lord

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    i dont believe this i go away for 10 days and you all stop talking.... Bahamuth, any further on?
     
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    Bahamuth The Dark Raver

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    na, can't get this stupid program to work, does somebody have a link where I can download a good writing program (you know, like Word, but not Word, caus it doesn't work)
     
  11. Bahamuth

    Bahamuth The Dark Raver

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    And, we didn't stop talking, we've just spread our conversasions thru the forum, find them and you'll recieve an apple
     
  12. pinchy

    pinchy Final Fantasy Dark Lord

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    but i dont like apple's... how about an orange?
     
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    Bahamuth The Dark Raver

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    good, caus I just ate the last apple
     
  14. Renzokuken

    Renzokuken You have failed this city!

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    .........Why are we talking about apples?
     
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  16. Renzokuken

    Renzokuken You have failed this city!

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    Lol, lets not go there hey? Alrighty then
     
  17. Master Zulrex

    Master Zulrex Shadow creatures beware!

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    Well...it's not bad and then agian it's not good.When your done with it Email it to me so i can read it.