Empress

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  1. The Empress

    The Empress Solitude and Strength...

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    EMPRESS

    You say that I am worthless.
    You have spoken words of chaos over me.
    A smile spreads across your face as
    you watch my world crumble around me.
    You seem not to be satisfied until you witness
    my utter destruction.
    You cannot know, you fail to understand
    just who and what I am.

    I am a precious hidden treasure.
    This heart locked behind walls of sorrow.
    My world of shadowed beauty is ever
    threatened, but not destroyed.
    I will rise again from the ashes of enemies past.
    No one will conquer me!
    I smell the battles of the future, I taste
    the blood of the living who will fall before me.

    I was meant to be loved, I longed to be
    loved by you.
    I desired only to love you, to caress your
    heart with my passion for you.
    I yearned to tell all of my love for you!
    You who once captivated the very essence
    of my being.
    Your touch is now a forgotten memory.
    I now see your vileness and you repulse
    me to the core.

    I have become invincible!
    I am now Empress of my Empire.
    Do not attempt to hurt me further.
    Betrayal will only strengthan me.
    When you, my foe, attack, my legions,
    whom I command, will silence you.
    I am Empress of an Empire of dreams,
    the void has been filled, I am Empress.

    Janurary of 2005​
     
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  2. Lillith Forbid

    Lillith Forbid Returned Queen of Bondage

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    very good ^_^! Beautiful and strong!
     
  3. The Empress

    The Empress Solitude and Strength...

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    Thank you, this was written during a time when I had hit an extremely dark and depressed state and I decided to take it out on some one who had hurt me horribly and litterally stipped my world away.
     
  4. Rosgwak

    Rosgwak The Masked Warrior

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    Holy freakin' gods above...... that was great! Excellent stuff!
     
  5. The Empress

    The Empress Solitude and Strength...

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    Thank you Ros...unfortunatly, my best work comes when I am in the depths of despair. But on an upside, do you think I could get rich off of being depressed??? LOL!!! :)
     
  6. Rosgwak

    Rosgwak The Masked Warrior

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    Hey, depression is great stuff for poetry.... I mean, all of my stuff here was written when I was depressed, it's good fuel if you use it right. So I think you could possibly get rich off of it. :)
     
  7. The Empress

    The Empress Solitude and Strength...

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    Why thank you, would you like to be my editor? Then you can have some of the profits...must always be thinking business you know! ;)
     
  8. Rosgwak

    Rosgwak The Masked Warrior

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    Yes, but I know what kind of business you have in mind. :p LMAO. We should probably actually stop now before we end up spamming in the wrong section. :)
     
  9. imagine99

    imagine99 Fia, the kind fencer

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    wow... that was extremely good! I wish I could write like that! Truly brilliant!
    *claps*
     
  10. The Empress

    The Empress Solitude and Strength...

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    Thank you very much!
     
  11. Zidane

    Zidane Master Thief

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    You have a talent for weaving words into beautiful meaning and images,very well written material.
     
  12. The Empress

    The Empress Solitude and Strength...

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    Thank you so much! I was actually nervous to put this on the forum, but all of you have been wonderful...thank you again!
     
  13. imagine99

    imagine99 Fia, the kind fencer

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    Aww... why nervous? It's absolutely amazing!!
     
  14. The Empress

    The Empress Solitude and Strength...

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    Thank you so much Imagine!!! I have been looking through past threads enjoying yours as well!!! :)