Well, this is a poem I wrote recently for my girl, Devin, and I just felt like putting it up cos... I dunno, I can? LOL, nah, any feedback anyone may have will be greatly welcomed, I'm always looking to improve my poetic technique. And yes, I am well aware some parts are not entirely grammatically correct, but we must use artistic license. Your voice is everything I hear Your face is all I see. Your gentle touch, I long to feel, The warmth inside of me. Your scent it fills the air I breathe, And no matter where I look, Love for you is all I feel, Because my heart you took. You took my soul, my very love, And threw away the key, I gave to you, all I am All that you can see. Because you only see my good, You do not see my flaws, You make me everything I can be, And yet I still want more. You’ve turned my world, upon its head, And I can’t get enough. I want to be there next to you, And feel your gentle touch. Your warm breathe, against my skin, I never want to part. Your gentle touch, your loving caress, Your hand against my heart. To feel it race, to make it so, As only you can do. And so I hope you keep these words, And know that I love you.