Destruction of Tori (unfinished)

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    chapter 12

    Untimeable viod
    Untimeable viod
    A void where there is a unlimited twisting path which to choose from this is where you may find the portals of time and space. the twisting path may lead to dead end or endless path twisting in a circle but others go to a cave of ice and snow the path is frozen and desolate and leads to the Healers Water- that cures even death is cured
    another path which is in a field of flowers to the Tree of Abundance- from the fruit bares four apple seed which will grow food for your party, a tree simply grows from the nutrients of the soil and bare fruits which will feed the party. even snow will feed this three producing a whiter green fruit.
    another path curved out goes to a nightmare and dark place where an entity waits for a friend this is a test, the first one of two - an entity trapped in this ravenous canyon near the depths of the core of the earth for eons, it looks for a friend by use of illusion giving a person a sense of wonderful existence that they would not want to leave. Full of people you know and a place where you felt like home and the others there will give you incentives to stay there forever.
    Another is to path of illusion and mystery where you take the second test - test of humility. a girl shall come to you asking for your help, only she is to trap you and drain you of your soul you are taken to a temple where you are to meet a king and will set a feast for you and you shall be informed of the treat you are being asked to help with you argree only to past out in the end of the feast you wake bound and gag facing a mirror then from the mirror comes a monster hideous you try to scream but you are gagged and your scream only echoes thought your mind you see others being taken and passing out till it's your turn as the creature emerge from the mirror it breaks to a thousand shards and cuts thought some of the ties that bound you many more embed itself to the skin and pain of such greatness is your only reward, you are able to get free and run out of the hall you are in but not till you find your party lifeless and dead.
    You finally hit daylight and see the girl and she is alone, you are given a chance for payback, do you take it.
    finally you get to the portals of time where you are able to find the right portal to when the destruction of tori started, take it and fulfill your quest .but be ready to fight a great evil. And a test of will and justice, or maybe a sacrifice you are unwilling to make. It all depends on you now. Good luck great adventurers.









    No Power Tyron
    The orb brought you to a futuristic place , where they were escalators everywhere and every hall seemed to be a different increment of time, a dragon suddenly came from the left of your vision and was about to strike you with a fireball
    What spell can you think off a Water spell, a Freezing spell Fire ball of your own, escape or teleport or scatter and hope for the best
    You try all types of spells nothing works to make things worst the orb doesn't work its glow is now dull and useless
    So you all scattered like rats in a hope no one gets hurt by the blazing fire, when the fireball and the dragon disappears and a man says to you hello, and thank you for not using your primitive powers on my subjects anyway your powers are useless here for all powers are rendered nutulised on these premises and many lands beyond, welcome to my collection , I am called the collector and now I have the privilege of collecting you as samples of primitive men , you will have full access to all parts of the land but you are expected to be where I want you to be when I call. But first we must know what you are.
    One will be sacrificed and displayed in the courtyard for paying customers to study
    So what kind of creatures are you? Doesn't matter we'll do a full analysis he he
    Then gas is stiffen in the vents nearby and within minutes you are unconscious and on the floor
    The keeper takes a wift of the stagnant air and sight with a joy then he cries out and androids type robots came to pick your party up, you are put in cages and individually woken up by a mild electric shock emitting from a staff held by hands of a young woman.
    You wake to find one of you are missing Alex the girl says I'm here to help you, you ask where is your companion?,
    She said that he's being prep for autopsy to see what manner a creatures you are. I'll save him before surgery just goes quickly
    She says this as she unlocks the cage holding you; you escape to where you first arrived while she later appears bringing Alex to you still woozy from the drugs he was injected with.
    She says use the orb quickly escapes for I may have triggered an alarm rescuing your young friend, but no magic works here
    no she says objects with power just need to be charged back to life, which I can do as she touch the orb it glows, now go,come with us , no I have to take care of something else now go as you use the orb many androids came firing laser particles in the air she deflected them back destroying some of the robot guard, go .... All debts have been repaid in full she says as you vanished into the light.



    You are teleported to nine again you recognize it, what you think she meant all debts have been paid in full, all of you shrug
    Truths or Illusions
    then in the distant a portal opens and a lady in mid 30's was bathed in light she approaches you she introduce herself as aurora she claims that in the future you triumph and restore everything back to normal, but your quest is still far from over she explains that the original destroyer had a vile of aging potion which she drank that's who the girl was who help you, but why help us, because you help her out of a prison she helped you get out of a prison in turn, it's some form of payback.
    but dire truths must be told the destroyer cannot be killed unless drained of her immortality she gained immortality by drinking from the fountain of the gods in the undying lands, she found a way there ands so must you, for in the hand of a warrior is a sword of power which drains people of magic and power he is Tristan the great he found the sacred sword made eons before by the ancients, you must use this against the destroyer then she can be killed a touch only is required by the metal to skin and you are powerless as an infant. you must stop here at the realm jiru where she will do her experiments on the realms people, by mutating people to monsters dumb but strong and will do her bidding if you can't stop her, don't dismay all you need to do is to decontaminate the water supply with the restorative earth you have, when they drink again they will turn back to normal. I give you this another orb for the original will be destroyed by her so you will be trapped and the one from tori of today will be used up to get through the barrier but hide this and when this happens you may use this orb to escape the undying lands from then on you are on your own, for this third orb will burn up and be spent returning you back.
    your only way of recourse is to open portals yourself learn this from the library of tori today, but to get back in your own time seek out the tempest in his realm of time for the orbs will be useless as a stone.
    to make it to the undying lands you must follow a map which i 'm giving you a direction to you must acquire the map for it will lead you where the barrier is, the orb is not powerful enough for you to make it in you now have two orbs of power find the one in tori of the today so you'll have three it will make a portal strong enough for two trips into the undying lands and back, and by the way you must choose who goes through the portal for one only can travel through a barrier with this much magic.
    You follow the instructions to the letter and find the orb's third duplicate at tori from there you decided that since only one can got through the barrier you would pick who it is from there they must complete the rest of the journey on their own
    Alex says anyway one year there is merely a day here in living world, according to the book of tomes.
    So if you have trouble you can rest and recuperate for as long as you want. You all decide that the one without powers of magic to sit out on the selection, then you all drawn straws
    The shortest straw wins the quest who would it be?...
     
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    New beginnings

    New beginnings

    The half ling used the power of o the sword to pierce the mirror sucking out it’s powers and bestowing it on the sword . this power allowed him to travel back in time he assured himself that their would not be any oppositions to his power.

    He knew if the original heroes were to fight him they may become an enemy that will be hard to stop, so he used the mirrors power to go back in time assuring each family were split up in different realms, then he created an army and took each realm by force.


    He as was foretold was to become the ruler of many realms one by one the realms fall in his control and he ruled it with an iron fist, demanding a tribute every month.

    Tori’s realm became his main kingdom for he had plan this from the begriming and grew fond of the realm.

    Years past and the heroes was split apart and lives their own lives training and practicing their skills to become somebody in their world , although they did not like it they had to live under the Halflings rule, and opposing the Halfling when they could

    But faith has it’s own plans a boy at the age of seventeen stumble on the book of tomes of power and it was him who the book choose to reveal the past occurrences that happened up to when the Halfling took the tree treasures. .

    The book revealed that the ancients had made other objects except the three which was known of, the others consist of a shield of invulnerability three jewels one of change, one of creation and one of destruction, and a elemental staff. There are eight all in all. And they can be found in different realms, but before this you must learn skills and magic from the original heroes and as the book finished it teleported you to nine where the book said you must learn from Michael the sorcerer his powers but first you must find him.

    But where is this sorcerer named Michael? And how can you convince him to teach you his magical knowledge.
     
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    Origins

    Origins

    In the beginning their was three race the knoxx the ancients and the janus

    They lived peacefully enough, but there was a yearly competition which was a way of avoiding war between the three factors of power.

    The eldest and most noble are the knoxx they were one of the first beings who grew settlements and advanced as time past. But it was law that they did not pass their knowledge outside their kind. And they flourished as a race.

    The ancients are the next eldest settlements known at the time they tend to be more adventurous and power came to them without trying, they were gifted, and they were advancing leaps and bounds more than any other race at the time, they would trade powers and knowledge with those unsettled races around at the time and gain a lot by sharing and receiving wisdom from other life forms, they were the most intelligent race of all.

    The janus is a warrior clan they fine tuned their arts and they learned differently, they found that they can pass on knowledge from one generation to another by touch alone building a wealth of knowledge to compete with the ancient and they also had more offspring’s than the rest their empire were three times bigger than the ancients population

    Knowing this, their small rivalry made trust between the two race impossible and they were left to learn things the hard way.

    Throughout time heroes from each were decorated and worshiped by each race.
    And then time came when these competitions were not enough. The janus being last mostly in magical ability grew tired, and wanted more power they had the numbers and used it to make a war with the ancients.

    The ancients pride alone in their ability saw to it that they did not ask help from the knoxx, and although the janus asked the knoxx for aid,, the knoxx were smart enough not to get involve they decreed that we are not enemies to either race but if you take any actions against us we will have no choice but to wipe both races out of existence.

    The janus suffered many lost their population shrank by half, just by the first wave of attack from the ancients, the janus were losing, and they cannot held out much longer till, the leader of the janus had a plan, he used the ancients who they captured as a way to end the war, under the janus control they made it that the ancients were planning to take over the knoxx by attacking the knoxx directly and making it that it was the ancients who attacked them.

    The very next day both the ancients and the Janus were summoned, to knoxx territory and were told to seized their fighting or both shall be held accountable. The ancients stopped at once but the janus leader took it to far and the fighting continued, you see the janus took bunch of priest of the ancients order and slit their throats.
    Disobeying the knoxx was a grave mistake they sent their best and wiped out both the ancients and the Janus who was baring arms at the time, there was heavy losses especially by the Janus by the end their were only hundreds of thousands left mostly women and children. When their were 200 million janus who used to be alive and over 3 million ancients loss their life from the slaughter ordered by the knoxx , At last there was peace.
     
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    How three became four

    How three became four

    The Janus were said to have inter procreate with the unsettled masses and mixing their blood they suddenly loss certain traits like how they passed knowledge from one generation to another and how they were formidable warriors with great bodies able to endure a rough life, as this happened they grew again in massive populations of over a billion and their were those who kept to the pure blood lines which was mere hundreds now and the one tainted who they called the vorlex., mixed blood in their language.

    The fourth race was called the vorlex and these are the ancestors of the humans today.
    It was millennia after the vorlex came when the ancients produce an offspring known as the serapath. And the knoxx also produced an offspring now known as the mano a few years after the vorlex came to existence. But these weren’t produced by birth but creation.
     
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    The truth about the three kings

    The truth about the three kings
    At the time the only settlements known was chiledman the city of the knoxx
    This town flourished and an elder sat as master of all and to either side of him is his brothers, who govern the entire city.
    It was said they had divine powers and was loved by everyone of its people
    They were said to have mastered skills beyond the powers of gods.
    The brother to the left perused the tree of knowledge and never returned
    The bother to the right seek for the fountain of gods to live forever and never returned
    The brother who held the throne seek for nothing only to serve his people
    Tales say the brother found the tree of knowledge and ate at it and due to this, his greed took over himself and he used all his power to hide the tree from anyone who seeks it keeping all knowledge to himself till today. And fable tell that the brother who seeks the fountain of gods now lives to protect the fountain from anyone drinking from it living forever in servitude for it’s the side affect of such magic
    Some say these are just fairy tales and that they are used to teach people lessons of what too much power will do to you. For they say the one who humbly serve the masses lived a fulfilled life till it was his end..
    But the man said the truth is each was true in a sense the one who seek for the fountain of gods was granted eternal life and youth, and now he is the keeper of the fountain, the undying lands was created by him after roaming the lands and not finding peace, he set out to create a place of peace for those worthy due to their bravery and sacrifice.
    However the one who seek knowledge, was given the highest knowledge of a dragon and that is what became of him , he is the eternal dragon..
    While the brother who ruled stayed and sharpen his skills till today he still rules as the leader of the knoxx, he has done this by asking for a sacrifice, he leaves his old body and into a new body sacrificed to assure his reign will be forever.
    Now here’s another story
     
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    alternate path to ending

    Knoxx Outcast
    You come to a world with no technology what's worst your orb of power shattered into four pieces this happened instantly and as it shattered the blast blinded Alex, you try to heal but was kind of successful, still not be able to see ,but as time goes by you try to make a food for you and your party, you deduce while eating you wouldn't find anything here for it's desolate and most of the people you saw was either some sort of pilgrim or nomads so you decide to leave this realm without the use of an orbs you decided to go Michael opened a portal but the portal won't form then Michael tried again with no success Lucas and Catherine tried as well but nothing it seems this realm has trapped you their, this must be why the orb of power shattered.
    You had no choice but to seek out a healer in the place, everyone said to go to the cave like dwelling where you will find a women who deals with healing and all sorts of magic we keep our children away for she is a powerful person we had no rain for a while and we were all starving and with her elixirs she poured on a nit of ground and within minutes spourts were growing and many kinds of plants grew within two days we had plenty we were grateful and another thing is the daughter of the king was sick and no one knew what to do as a desperate measure we seek her out and she cure her without much trouble she made her drink a flower which she boiled down. We are very grateful but many more are afraid how does she know to cure the princesses within a couple of minutes, they are afraid of her power.
    But all we can say is that she's a nice old lady, she maybe able to help you
    She said hello who's their , you replied and said we have someone who is injured
    She says quickly come in she looks at Alex and now you should be careful with orbs there are many shattered pieces in your eyes well get rid of that with one willow water and well heal it with some of my plants roots. What shattered that is in a form of an orb, you quickly say please can you look at our orb it split into four pieces we don't know why it shattered, she said you transported yourself here with this yes well you can't have anything that will transport you anywhere for they who are called the knoxx uses this realm for trapping people who done a criminal act. I myself was a great scientist who worked on a cure for the plague which was rampant I tried with my elixir and instead of killing it mutated as a strain that was more potent, killing many who was not knoxx, for we knoxx cannot be affected by disease and virus we have immune systems which cannot be touched but many other who lived with them haven't got any immunity unlike the knoxx especially the serapaths who was susceptible the knoxx soon figure out how to destroy this strain which cause anyone who breaths to be infected, I was imprisoned for years then , I heard they destroyed it by synthesizing their immune system and made an elixir which nullified this virus.
    As soon as they destroyed the virus they left the lands they occupied, why they don't know but they left for the undying lands. Anyway getting back till today no one can make a portal out of this realm but with this orb power I may be able to leave with you if I fix this, please I have done nothing but tried to help .please I need to be freed. You all agree to take her with you, I maybe the last of the knoxx for I've have been exiled here for a millennia or even more
    The only problem is I will need a couple of things to change the frequency of this orb to leave this place, a flower which only lies on the hilltop mt hajimeya it is protected by a mist guardian which makes it hard to find the way to the main gates of the garden and a blood pool water which lies in the well in the middle of the garden, however in the garden lives a man-eater demon which hides in the shadows and only comes out to feed on travelers who are weak.































    Deliver us
    a great land in the north called ashra were two people one master the other a people who lives as slave, as with many other kingdoms with a community of lower people comes a faith a belief that they would one day be free, and they look up to a god who has not heard them for many eons, yet they keep their faith, they toil and are treated badly by their masters and their faith lies within these peoples king who is heartless as the rest. the king had a son, and the son rebelled against his father for all his time is predetermined and was somewhat a prisoner in his own palace, at times he took liberties of pleasure from the palace life when it is time for his lessons with the priest called jad who he bribe to let him free, jad was kind and saw him as a boy who needs his liberties.
    during these liberties in a chance meeting in the market place he saw a girl which he fell in love with at first sight, she was the daughter of a slave, through he kept it secret from his father for he would see her as unworthy not as he sees her, they would talk and soon she fell in love with him, two whose family are at opposite ends. And yet as the king grew old and ill he still did not profess his love for a slave only when he became king did he marry her and she became the new queen of ashra with the mother of the prince approval, for she understood towards her sons intentions.
    with time the prince now king became the deliverer of these slaves who he proclaimed as equal, but many in his council does not want such a change especially his general who would claim power if he dies without a son, at the time many of the council members favored the general taking power and keeping things as it is.
    Soon the queen produced an heir to the throne and as he grew his mother taught him to be humble and good natured towards others no matter their class and in his eighteenth birthday the now king became old, the change has not been passed for all those years and the thought of equality will soon die with the present king. his dying wish was to fulfill his promise which he did not have the courage at the time to fulfill for he feared the councils and his peoples wish to keep themselves to a higher standing to those they saw as slaves. thought his reign was near to end the slaves were treated better than before but still slaves non the less.
    The general and some of the council members kidnapped the prince without a heir and the king dying changes would not happened. The king searched far and wide without success, till you came seeking the flower of restoration given to ashra the first king by the spirit of nature they knew as gaia spirit of the lands. It is said that with this flowers petal mixed with water will rejuvenate nature, even to the point of death. and if drank by a man they would be able to live forever, but it was said that due to this power many tried to steal the plant and only a flower is left ,the plant is said to been lost, some say Gaia took it back from peoples because of thier greed, the flower was then hidden and three keys hold its secrets one is a map another is a orb of power and the last is an actual key which the king of ashra has passed down to its descendants, the key is the price the king is giving as a reward to finding his son.
    You need this key.
     
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    The Saint Beast

    Saint Beast
    The knoxx learnt to create life they mastered death and were at the height of their power when they decided to live in seclusion , the ancients a race to develop only a couple of years after the the knoxx developed their talents were always competing with the knoxx
    They offered to share their knowledge with the knoxx when they were just developing as a race but the knoxx refused and since then a rivalry became known. There was a third race the janus who had potentials if only the ancient didn’t look down on them for they were slow to develop magical prowless although they were to develop at the same time as the ancients. They had also an advantage over the ancient in breeding for they out numbered the ancients populist by three fold by the height of power of all three.

    The knoxx success in creating a new life flamed a jealousy from the ancients and since then tried with minimal success to create a life like the knoxx had created.
    They even tried unknown magic and failed. They had enough the ancients used their elite men to steal the recipes to creating life

    it was easy enough for the knoxx kept their knowledge within everyone of their people, even their young knew the basics of wealth of knowledge the knoxx had.
    They took several men from a knoxx village, they told them what each knew and enough was gathered to perform creation of a being.

    But it wasn’t perfect, for the men didn’t reveal all that they knew even with their lives threaten.

    The knoxx found out what the ancients had done but did nothing, there only concern was the safety of their kind.

    With enough time the ancients perfected the creation of life only they puoured their malice and their hunger for power in this being. And later became out of control killing several of the ancients most prominent elders absorbing their knowledge and power and was later known as the rune’s or saint beast and it was aid to have later came for some of the knoxx leaders and had succeeded in absorbing their knowledge making it a danger so the knoxx created a lair in the city known as baulker’s rock where it the saint beast was banished to, and is now gathering grounds for beast known as malciour .who are savage and very cunning killers who eats flesh even their own..

    Now that the knoxx came in seclusion the throne of power was handed down to the ancients and they stride to become known as the greatest beings of the universe.
     
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    Bio data of characters

    Characters

    Master Steward- M Jeremy 45 H
    1.Midaz Touch 1. Trident- eminates an intense pulse of enegy
    Head of the lands defense, usually from a nobleman family, an aristocrat. matured fighter with plenty of experience, can inflict as much damage points as a knight and trained in archery.

    Story - when he was young lad he meet a girl who asked for help for some money to eat, being of aristocracy he saw her as a street rat and just rode away, what he didn’t know was that it was one of the faiths testing him. Later that day the same girl shows up and revealed her true self then she stated to him “ You still don’t regret your ways I shall make you humble, you just rode away from me when I asked for help, you would not even part with one gold piece, you love your wealth so much, you shall give you the golden touch.

    But because of this you shall lose your father after a hording party will ravage his village and then again you shall lose your wife by a illness, she will contract then lose your son to a war he was conscripted due to a great war.

    Now he knows of only loss and loneliness though out his years, but he became a fair and caring leader. His pain is what makes him a great warrior and nothing else to loss makes him dangerous enemy.

    Paladin Crusader- M James 30 H - 200 SP
    1.Repulsion 2.Energy Balls
    1.Aura Sword - Sword made of soul magic able to cut throught any barrier.

    Story -born without a father he soon became a paige for a local knight of the time he then advanced his training as a knight being born into a wealthy land owning family. He has another brother who now thinks to become a knight like him and two other sisters whom he loved as dearly as his mother soon he was appointed as a paladin and went on a exhausting crusade
    In the crusade his fellow paladin who died in his arms gave him his sword to remember him by
    To date he serves his country proud of his accomplishments.






    Master Archer- M Ryan 32 H -200 SP
    1.Thunder Bolt 2. Electric Field 1. Dyna Bow. magical bow using hand gestures and makes infinite arrows.

    Story - As a boy he has experience in hunting due to him being the only son of a great archer who also followed his fathers and his fore fathers footstep as a master archer. He had a lot to live up to being thirtieth generation archer he wielded his skills and became proficient in his accuracy at times showing off at carnivals and fairs held at their county.

    As he himself joint the illustrious group as master archer of the realm his father gave him a special bow which was handed down fore many generation. And till today he carrys this weapon proudly.

    Master Thief- F Sarah 34 Dwarf - 200 SP
    1.Destortion 2. Sheild of Saturn

    Story- as long as he can remember he was living of the streets stealing what he could to survive
    He developed many skills for survival and along the way he acquired a small trove of items he stolen throughout the years one of which was stolen from a centaur which is able to shield one person from any harm against any weapons even those endowed with powers or otherwise.

    As he became master thief he learned an art masterful that makes him even more impossible to be catch by the power of distortion where he is able to distort a solid object and pass through it.

    Barbarian Warrior- M Jason 34 Half-Orc
    Non-Magical
    Story - being a family of only brothers and having a king for a father meant he had to strive to be the best, fighting for the crown sadly being the sibling of four brothers he is weaker and smaller than the rest and his second eldest brother won the throne. Striving to be like his father he developed his body and mind and he grew up a powerful fighter and soon became the right hand man of the newly elected king.


    that's it for now
     
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    Master Prophet- M Vincent 33 H - 1000 SP
    1.Blind Faith 2.Reliquish 3.Beleive
    He was a carpenters son who was taken at a young age to be trained for a pending war between the two nation of ohara, he kiled men due to the war but his mind wont let him forget the tradgedy of the battle and he turned to religion to pay for his sins .
    He later heard a voice foretelling dangers of future events which gained him a rank of master prophet ,
    he took it too far gaining followers, and this power grew to his head, claiming himself a messenger of all the gods, then one day the voices stopped and his reputation faded he only heard the voices again when he became an outcast and humble, now he spreads the great words of the god to every village and anyone who will listern.

    Master Cleric- F Catherine 80 Elvan - 800 SP
    1. Fire Aura 2. Destroy Undead 3. Mind Blast.
    She was sold to slavery at a young age, she escaped and nearly died in the desset of lya until she was saved by a local order of priestess, which are known as the cleric of the sand, she grew up there and became top of her class and was appointed as a successor to the order.

    Alchemist Warrior- M Riley 150 H
    1. Turn to Stone 2. Dragons Skin 3.Youth
    He is the descendant of the great alchemist who created the dragons flame potion , he was taught in his fathers school and was given all opportunities to become a great alchemist and he strived to invent something that would give him recognition like his father

    But he never could outdo his father , still he is the dean of the university of alchemy and potion making .


    Gypsy Elder- F Ruth 2200 H 3000 SP
    1.Soul Stealer 2.Regenerate 3.Body Snatcher
    The oldest of the gypsy an elder thought through time and due to the use of the technique of body switch he has a young and powerfull warriors body.
    She has been alive for over four millennia gaining power and knowledge
    Not is much known about her

    Heretic
    Dark Orb 2. Light Orb 3.Hellfire
    He was an outcast for a sickness which was visible in his body and he later met someone who returned him to normal but when he returned to his homelands, he was again cast out like many of the other villagers when the serpent rider gained power and took over many realm .

    The serpent rider destroyed his realm and he was forced out,

    He gained the serapaths knowledge in a realm which was the home world of the ancients
    At the time the serapaths was the great power of the time and for years he learnt some of their knowledge.

    He became a heroes for killing the serpent riders and freeing many worlds.
     
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    Champion Knight-M Kristopher 36 H
    Non-Magical White Dragons Armour- able to repeal extra ordinary amount of force,
    no damage inflicted at any time, unless magical and only a quarter damage from elemental attacks.

    Story – his family was slaughtered by a raiding party, he grew strong by vengeances alone, he went with james to the same knighthood schooling but took the way of the arms instead of magic. He grew stronger than james and more accustomed to the use of weapons in combat.

    He bids his time till he can revenge his family.


    Head Tribesman-M Aron 29 H
    Non-Magical

    He was given rights to kinship when he saved the local tribes prince , and the prince and him became good friends and he grew to live in the village later his friend the prince contracted a illness which claimed his life and the king took him in as his own and as later years as he passed on the leadership aron used the laws of kinship to gain the throne, which the former king supported without question.

    Till this day he is a wise ruler of the kamate tribe.



    Tribal Sharman- M Jared 43 H - 1000 SP
    1.Sacrifice 2. Mass Distortion 3.Possession

    A tribesman of the kamate tribe he is the witch doctor of the village, he is fifth generation healer his father and fore fathers was the village witch doctor and he has to upheld that position he learned the possession technique from another who he saved during a struggle between the white folks of the village and the native gypsies.

    He has performed the possession twice now and has lived very long through he is due for another possession at the age of fifty he likes this body he has for it contained so much knowledge in magic










    LoneWolf- M Alex 37 H - 1000 SP
    1.Necromancing 2. Soul Drinker 3. Make Door
    Story-
    He has been an outcast all his life gaining a trait of the kamenji which was known for necromancing and soul drinking a forbidden art in the village he lives, his father and mother sought to kill him they sent him in the woods to be eaten by predators or starve to death but faith stepped in he was found by thieves who took him in and taught him skills to survive, he was to be trained in the guild but because of the kameji he has to soul drink at the age of 20 to survive. And he was seen as a monster by his adopted family

    Again he was an outcast


    Bounty Hunter- M Trent 40 H - 800 SP
    1.Weild 2.Mind Probe
    Story -
    He saw his brother die by the hands of a monster known as the lonewolf and since then he has been capturing the fouless of all who has bounty on his head but the greatest bounty of all would be the lone wolf althought he saw him in his killing state he does not know what he looks like as a human being.
     
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    Serpent Riders

    The first glimpse of the serpent riders where at karmak the birth place of the orginal destroyer, they where three brothers who aspired to become rulers of the world, they aspired to become like the destroyer, killing without mercy and they studied under the great teacher, which the destroyer learned her magic from a great man named kell

    He was said to had learned his magic from his teacher who was a mano, till today everyone knows krell for his power and his home the krell cave where he stored his most powerful magic and knowledge, it is said he learned immortality and was trapped in the cave and this cave was made as a prison for him and anyone trying to help him out will be fighting magic which no one has ever survived.

    They learned to summon the serpents of flame which they ride anything it touches would be engulfed by flames, they destroyed many realms and ruled with an iron fist..
     
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    No less than a beast

    In the knoxx history they have only been two that went bad the first was who they called a beast the second a more well known character known as the destroyer.

    yje beast was always more cunning and dangerous for he was taught by the same person as the reigning king of the knoxx, thus he learned longevity by soul taking, which he use to hide for many centuries as guises.

    he is well known as other characters in history, he is always portayed as master of all evil and are feared, and many sects has been created who worship him.

    he has tried to end the world nine times and everytime another of the knoxx died stopping him
    these heroes are trained to stop apocalyptic forces, but none ever survived a battle with the beast and lived. the nineth time is what made him stop for it is his own sister who volunteered to stop him , and althrough he did have great feelings of love for this person, he killed her non the less, but this changed him completely, and now he hides from everyone in the world. and has never been seen since.

    but most destructions are attributed thoughout time to his followers the greatest of ehich was the sect they called the order or kell.
     
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    the order of kell

    this order has done the most evil things througout time they caused mass deaths, plagues
    and many others too countless to mention.

    they worshipp the beast who they called Kell meaning the forever and they have performed many rites of longevity which kell was known for they tried for many millenias to perfect the techinque known as soul migration, where you may live on in another persons body as long as they are willing to give a living body to another. for if it's done without consent many dire consiquencves could happen such as being stuck in that new body forever or even losing your powers for this technique ids life draining,
     
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    Well, you clearly put a lot of effort into this, which is nice. But I am not crazy about it, overall. Keep at it, though. Maybe you can turn it into something better...Its all in your mind, you know that, don't you? Writing is extremely cerebral...when done right in this business. Godspeed to you.
     
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    for the new year....

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    The purity of power

    Power can be summed up to many facets and heirachy

    The most powerfull of them ever was the knoxx and their society is filled with these facets of power, the main belief is that in a past life if you did something bad you would lose power or what is called purity and as your line intermingle with others through genetics you gain certain powers in every one of your life span

    For example if you were bless enough to be born between a pure water elemental to a wind elemental you would have both powers or a combo like ice and depending on the purity of your bloodlines it gets it’s strength from and mixture of two different powers may come up withmany variations in powers

    The main powers known to many is known as elemental power spiritual power body power and psychic power then there are those rare such as power of light power of dark
    The giver of life (creation)and the end of life (destruction) and the flow of life (change)
    There are many more but it would be too long to list.

    Then the second rule what you were before you would be attracted to it forexample if you are of water you would be drawn to healing people depending on your bloodlines purity
    Or experience if you were a cop five times in your previous life you would be drawn to this profession.

    Then there is what we call the innocents depending on the purity and magnitude the purer the power, these pople are like marters and prophets who made a difference in a past life.

    The purer they are the more capacity in power and they can be used as a kind of battery to boost once power, but after an evil act they will loose their use and no matter how pure they were once wrong act can undo many life time of goodness. Being pure gives you godly powers what they call unlimited.

    Then there are those who has both innocence and blood in their hands these are what they call defenders they never loose their capability to be innocent for they were made to
    Defend others usually someone who give up their life for their country and fellow man

    Then there are what the knoxx calls the cleaners they have all three powers in their disposal change create and destroy and don’t suffer any consequence for their action
    They fix anything they wish to restore balance in their realm. No one knows howyou become these for it’s a secret initiation and no one knows the criteria in being picked..
     
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    Blood Water

    This is a forbidden art in the knoxx civilization, they are said to have been the only one who mastered it to perfection without any side affect known as the hunger which later the ancient’s civilization found out.

    The water inside our body including blood can be purified using a persons will it can be extracted out of the body and use as a revitalization technique, what some have called soul stealing where your essence is taken from one person or more to increase a persons life force.

    Vampires are said to be great descendants of one of the ancients for it is in them to live forever by drinking blood of a person but like the ancients they partook in the insatiable huger, making them unable to ever stop.

    It was said as a the first vampire was born from an ancient who partook the pure water ritual by the mouth consuming the blood and soon nature evolved their mouths with fangs in order to feed and live on using another persons life force.

    Many still practice and some are born with the hunger but like the ancients they can’t end this curse.
     
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    Is it really equal

    Rules are set upon many types of power and the most well known of them is equal exchange, but is it really equal, throughout time it has been proven by accident that this does not have to be true.

    In the world of the knoxx they learned that to create you must have enough power behind it and to destroy merely a small amount is required.

    Now for the big question that alchemy posed can you bring back soul, with other magic it takes a lot more power than required to divinely restore a person, if not careful the creation can be flawed .

    As proven you need up to three to four times the amount of output in power to restore what has expire, but this is not always true if one was willing to give up once self and if the attachments are strong enough, I mean emotional attachments one can restore a person from death. And without loosing the casters body if these attachments are true, but may exhaust the body of the caster by depending on these attachments alone.

    Emotions play a great part in magic it’s our motivations that guides the power being exerted and if enough factors are true one can triple the strength of a casting or even more. And if sacrifice is involve the power can reach infinity thus creating what is known as divine interventions.

    Only a few have successfully pulled off these interventions and shouldn’t be meddled with without cause.
     
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    210 A weather to match tomlei
    you came on a sunny day but then out of nowhere the rain started and then stopped as you ran for shelter to the next town. There were a bunch of priest who were asking their god of weather for more rain and as they chant an ancient text, then thunder roared and they rejoiced they say the lady will give us rain , thank you my lady they all cried out with glee , you went to one of them and asked why they were celebrating
    the leader hears you , and says you must be new to this land , our crops are dying so as our animals and we too are suffering the lost of rain we missed it like dessert for the past 3 years or so and now our lady is going to give us rain.
    You see our lady has been crossed with us for we have not given thanks for our great prosperity of our rich soils and the divine weather we always had, we don’t rejoice anymore as we did when rain fell and so she visit us as a form of a stranger , a lady and she surveyed us until a day when she revealed herself saying to us weren’t praising nor giving thanks to what we were given by her and she rose above the cloud s and opened her arms then thunder and lightning boomed and it became dark she said here is the last rains you shall have till you became more thankful for what is freely given to you, and then great rain fell for 20 days and then it stopped , it has been 3 years now and soon the rain will come once more for we are starving and thirsty
    Our supply is low and if we don’t get this we will all surely die., the earth once so rich with goodness now bare and dry , now the great lady has forgiven us we shall see rains again.

    Do you help by a water spell for now

    198. Fire and Ice setra
    the orb takes you to an interesting world after al it is a land of ice and fire one side of the realm is devoted to fire and the other side ice and in the middle stands a great statue of a man with a word curved into it as to mean fire the other a women with a word curved beneath it which must mean ice for they pointed to their king oms they wore great crowns and were holding hands.
    A man says hello stranger welcome to lord fire and queens ice’s land we a0re devoted followers of both fire ands ice. Would you like to meet our ruler they are where we are going it was said that any one new must meet the rulers and be registered before you can join anything or visit anywhere the ice or fire takes you. Oh don’t worry they are off good temped and quite a peaceful ruler rule breakers however must incur either the wrath of fire or ice and if you are able to stand it you are forgiven, although not many goes through this for we do not dare break rules.

    Small to be Big
    You have been transported to a land where little men and women lived, same size as a hobbit but with no hairy feet, they were nice and in0vites you to their town. were they were having a celebration and you all join in the party drinking and eating and dancing to these sweet tunes. In the distance seems a wisp of smoke in the mountain then it's coming closer then the party stopped all of the sudden one said No it can't be the dragons of the mountains are stirring again what has happened to the spell which keeps them asleep.
    Then many of these creatures jumped on each others back and suddenly they morphed into these geomantic men made of rock , you were shocked and yet amused at this anyway you thought that a couple of these gigantic rock creatures could surely stop a dragon in it's tracks.

    Changes
    you entered a new realm only to find as you set foot on the land you weren't in your bodies, how could this be now Lucas was the paladin and now in charged anyway Michael deduce with some reasoning that this realities atmosphere must have made them cause a change . And for now we must learn to use each others skill and powers before we encounter others who may be see them as odd, while in the forest you tried out your new bodies, Catherine said they must be a way of getting back our bodies, I don't want to be stuck as a man with this body. anyway how do any of us know by leaving this realm we may go back to our bodies maybe it's a permanent switch , Michael interjected someone must know how to change back maybe we can make enquires in the next town

    Small to be Big
    You have been transported to a land where little men and women lived, same size as a hobbit but with no hairy feet, they were nice and in0vites you to their town. were they were having a celebration and you all join in the party drinking and eating and dancing to these sweet tunes. In the distance seems a whisp of smoke in the mountain then it’s coming closer then the party stopped all of the sudden one said No it cant be the dragons of the mountains are stirring again what has happened to the spell which keeps them asleep.
    Then many of these creatures jumped on each others back and suddenly they morphed into these geomantic men made of rock , you were shocked and yet amused at this anyway you thought that a couple of these gigantic rock creatures could surely stop a dragon in it’s tracks.
    Do you offer help

    Catch me if you can. buton
    Blinking is a hard and very useful way of traveling, these little men called dreks were very well immerse in using this way of moving instantaneously. You find them very bad for as a visitor to this land you were robed by three of these dreks they showed them selves and said out loud catch mew if you can.

    You lost most of your gems and half of your gold disappeared as well, the only thing they didn’t take was the orb of power. It seems they are thieves and this is how they live by stealing gold and gems .what do you think of doing.
    Set a trap with the remaining gems and gold

    THE ONE foran
    a flock of lizard men were trying to capture an eagle in flight, you watch then you see that the eagle turned into a formidable women, and not that far behind her were eight lizard men who was ready to fight to capture her who they called the one, they 0keeped shouting don’t let the one escape, you all started to run after the lizard men determine to fight and save this poor women from them , fight and see who is victorious

    After you kill more than 5 of their comrades they were ordered to retreat , scavenge and add all possession as found , the women who they called the one , thanks you and tells you of her faith, you see she has been haunted by many because of her powers and she trusted you would not betray her trust, she ids able to replicate herself to as many people as she wants and her newly acquired power of shape shifting gave her a way of escaping instead of fighting for her life always. After much talk of your quest and everything that had happened to most of you she says, for saving her life she will teach one of you this unusual gift and another the power to shape shift if you are interested all she ask in return is if she can join you on your quest and maybe find a home somewhere else for she has no power to make a portal to other realms like you.
    Do you accept this proposal?
     
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    Demons and Monsters

    as you know the knoxx created the mano as close to perfection as possible, and as they left the realms in seclusion
    The mano seeks them out, as humans seek to see their creators. but in absence they have seek to
    Become the creator themselves, surely it wasn't impossible, but in their immaturity they wanted to create an
    Even more perfect being and that is where they experimented giving strength and speed to their creations
    but to gain such attributes they partook changes in complexions to having scales or gills to be adapt to the harsh conditions of the lands.

    Many different types of beings were created from the animals which the knoxx created, they took it to a new level where those to be in the ocean grew gills and fins
    to those that fly grew wings to those granted the gift speed and to those who had great strength these four attributes were used on beings and each had defenses such as hard shell like bodies to sleek fast furs to wings as big as dragons and those who carry venom or toxins as defenses.

    Eons of time past they breed between each other and many different types of creatures came to life, which are now classified as demons or monsters
    Who have adapted to their environments, from four expanded to thousands of breeds of life. All thanks to the arrogance of their creators, the Mano
     
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    the nameless ones

    the knoxx at it's high in society was intrigued by remains of a society that was even more advance than they are
    if that was possible. they deciphered much and learned that they used their wisdom to create a way of drawing power
    from one being to another or what the knoxx can translate as sharing powers to strengthen a the next generations
    till everyone reaches a plateau in magic that’s is limitless.

    the knoxx further transcribed info on these peoples destruction a hollow which took all magic this sharing of power attracted a being from another realm,
    which bathes in unlimited power, and then later these people learned a new way of magic known as science and as unstable as science is this is what destroyed them
    for they neglected the lands and seas till the planet could no longer hold life. they multiplied and they just exhausted the resources they had.

    it is rumored the nameless ones are still living within the society today and now the knoxx hunts for them by testing their bloodlines for a trace of the nameless ones genes
    it is written that they had powers to shift and are hiding themselves for they were marked on the body and face by the last days of their world when the containments touch their skins
    but not long they inter breed with others, as they dispersed themselves to other realms.

    if they can find them the knoxx plan to learn as much as they could for they hunger for the vast knowledge left by them which are at the moment unreadable.