Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by I. R. Shogun, Apr 30, 2007.
Pick pocketing from a guy who just killed himself right before his eyes...lol..I guess you gotta do whatcha gotta do in that type of situation. Those last three installments were awesome. Blades is such a badass...he's got such a rep and an array of nicknames.
And I was glad to see the Ghost Cop make an appearance although it was short...
I liked the conversation with Ricky'y gang they're funny..especially the blam blam part....
I tried to make their slang as stereotypical as possible, mostly to provide some relief from the constant killing. And the officer will be in some of the more interesting scenes to come.
wow, its really good man. you've improved a lot as a writer since the first book. keep it up!!
Yeah, I highly doubted that it would end with Blades getting killed by a gator, with all the freaks he's been facing...that would have been a major let down.
What was Ripper talking about a nephew for? I think Blades acknowledged that as well, that he had beaten the nephew...I was a little confused cause I can't figure out who it was.
The nephew was Tony Batone, who was the main antagonist in the first Descent.
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