Dead Flowers...

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by RayCaptain, Nov 19, 2012.

  1. RayCaptain

    RayCaptain Stranger in a Strange Land

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    The agony in me I know all too well,
    Every hour of the day, tolled by a bell,
    Counting every year gone by that I am without,
    Elegance so pure until life is give out...

    Days so dark, they fade into ceaseless night,
    But what good is it listen to a sinner's plight?
    An open grave, where I now reside,
    Laying there since the day you died...

    Wilting souls reach skyward, beauty in a grim way,
    Maybe I am worth the visit, but no one comes to stay,
    My soul is torn apart, its pieces scattered,
    The banner where I lay, faded and tattered...

    Until the sun shines once more, breath of life renew,
    And I can feel a warm breeze on my cheeks, taste morning dew,
    Let the flowers undo the hurt, erase them,
    And when they die, do not replace them...

    Embrace the new day, a dawn that burns away my memory,
    And seers closed the wounds that stem from me,
    Dead flowers for two torn apart,
    Until the beat returns to my heart...

    Darkness fades to light,
    And the dimness becomes bright,
    Dead flowers meant as a goodbye to the broken,
    Only dead flowers remain, my grave and my eyes open...
     
  2. S.J. Faerlind

    S.J. Faerlind Flashlight Shadowhunter

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    This one reminds me of Remembrance day
     
  3. Kakashi

    Kakashi Call me Deacon Blues

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    Wow, this shit is DEEP bro. I'm crying right now... real tears.