Can someone read my story? (favours returned.)

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  1. kippersays_hi

    kippersays_hi New Member

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    So I'm working on a novel that I'm serious about, it's a supernatural fantasy/adventure set in the middle ages.

    I really really really need someone helpful to read it and provide honest feedback :(:eek:

    I shall do the same for other aspiring authors out there. :):)

    Merci.
     
  2. Aelfwynn

    Aelfwynn Member

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    I'll read you're story :) I'd love to! I can try my hardest to give constructive feedback
     
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    AlphaAlex Official Forum Nuisance

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    link? then sure
     
  4. Firiath

    Firiath Halfling barbarian

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    How long is it? I usually wouldn't do this as I have plenty to read already, but you said it's set in the middle ages and as it turns out that is my specialty :cool:
     
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    kippersays_hi New Member

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    the story is eleven chapters long so far but I'll only give a chapter for you to read, um, the only way I can send it is via email?

    It's on Word, so if you're still interested write down your email,

    thanks.:rolleyes:
     
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    Richard P Titus New Member

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    Do you want feedback on any particular aspect of your story or just general comments?

    I can take a look if you are still looking for input. Or, you can contact me later when needed.

    quoxxel@gmail.com
     
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    Firiath Halfling barbarian

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    @Aelfwynn That's an awesome email address :D

    Mine is my TFF username with @hotmail.de added to it :)
     
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    @Firiath I may have a slight obsession, if you hadn't guessed