Beyond time...

Discussion in 'Original Works' started by BlackWolfRising, Jun 8, 2008.

  1. BlackWolfRising

    BlackWolfRising New Member

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    Again a very simple poem... i personally not quite sure what to think about it...

    The river beyond time weaves,
    Sand to stone,
    Heart to soul,
    And grief to love.

    :duh:
     
  2. Black Tattoo

    Black Tattoo The Corruptor

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    A very interesting concept. The visualization is pretty cool, subtle enough to really make you think without a lot of words. Nicely done! :)