An idea of a story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DK-Y2Y, Mar 26, 2011.

  1. DK-Y2Y

    DK-Y2Y Dream of the Endless

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    During the age of 2100 BC, in a fictional land on earth called Relinquinia. Relinquinia is a sandy desert where a civilization called Iseuans lived in. Iseuans are a very developed tribe that built the most fantastic monuments. Iseuans are notable for their resourceful and talented building skills. The evidence of their skills are their beautifully and well-constructed buildings which are made of sticks. They worshipped all substances made of wood. The wooden structured buildings are as strong as our modern buildings. Their foundation is as unique as our current buildings. The reason behind all of this remains a hidden secret. Their race has been insulted by another tribe named Fasl El Mout since they burn wood. The Iseuans were so angry that they truly unleashed war. That war was the biggest and most deadly war ever recorded, with a death rate of 100 million Iseuans. The Iseuans had been suppressed by a more powerful foe. Relinquinia was taken over. Their dreams were completely shattered…
    The Iseuans turned to into slaves. One by one, they fell. Their civilization is nearing to extinction. Fifty years after the war, the Iseuans vanished from the sight of the world. As generations passed, worldwide civilization began to reconstruct itself, building a totally different vision of what the Iseuans truly wanted to establish. This lead to the modern technology of metallic structures. Thus, the visions and dreams of the Iseuans are long forgotten. The Iseuans are also a forgettable civilization that no modern man remembers.
    In another dimension, the Iseuans are imprisoned and punished. That place is pretty much like Hell. The Iseuans are in deep agony that their goals have destroyed. One of the imprisoned Iseuans called Yamspah believes that is time for them to come back to life and return to their buried bodies. Yamspah orates a speech to his fellow tribe that the Modern World is responsible for the destruction of their monuments. They believe that we; the advanced humans perished their world. The Iseuans finally returned back to Earth. All their old monuments are buried under ‘The Seven Modern Wonders of the World’. The Iseuans are led by Yamspah to destroy our seven wonders. The Iseuans captured many old pirate ships and they filled their cannons with small insects of their world called Jahs, so that they can destroy our modern structures and rebuild their old monuments. Thus, Yamspah called himself Vagabond because of what we say to people that move from land to land.
     
  2. WildPony

    WildPony New Member

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    Interesting. Why don't you try to write the first chapter or so, then we can get a proper feel for the idea. I think it has some merits!
     
  3. Druid of Lûhn

    Druid of Lûhn The Little Lamb.

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    Interesting idea. I don't know if that is written a s a prologue or something, but by simply writing it all up to the pirate ships a a story would give a good prologue.