A poem for my neice

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  1. imagine99

    imagine99 Fia, the kind fencer

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    *I'm writing this off the top of my head. I don't believe in God, but at times like this I pray for those I love to have somewhere better to go to be at peace. I just found out about 10 minutes ago that my brother's daughter was born stillborn (she was born dead) :( :( :( :(
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    A poem for Corina Marie
    May you now hear my voice, and these words as I pray
    Shall God ever keep your soul, far far away
    Where our memories of you should be, there is just empty space
    For all the ones who never knew, your sweet and innocent face
    We mourn the silence of your cries, as lakes of tears fall
    We wonder at your laughing voice, that wasn't heard at all
    Your aunt Sarah had a feeling, of something sad to come
    She sensed you gender and your death, the truth has made her numb
    Know we'll always love you, what happened was so sad,
    That such a thing has happened, has made me down and mad
    We will hold you dear and close, we'll never let you go
    In heaven you'll live on, I know.
    Now you dance with angels, a twinkle in your eyes
    I look up and see you, up above the skies
    The clouds are now your pillow, for your gentle rest
    Heaven is your home, for you deserve the best
    I will never see you as a child, born without chance
    I'll see you as an angel, with a the most beautiful dance
    Your family together, will miss your golden hair
    Your brother and your sister, will cry for an act unfair
    Now as we lay you down, for your eternal sleep
    We will pray for God, your gentle soul to keep
    You sadly died, to never wake
    For God your vibrant soul to take
     
  2. Isaac29GT

    Isaac29GT Spawn of Skyanide

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    Thats so sad, i feel for your loss Imagine
     
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    I'm deeply touched by your feelings Imagine. Bless all of you and I wish you all my heartfelt sympathy.
     
  4. Rosgwak

    Rosgwak The Masked Warrior

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    Man, I'm sorry Imagine....reading that, it made me hurt emotionally. I know there's no way we could really know your pain from just a poem, but I will still say that I feel for you and all others.
     
  5. firefaerie

    firefaerie Art House Member

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    I believe you can. But i suppose some just have a way with words. That was a really deep poem. You have my sympathies
     
  6. imagine99

    imagine99 Fia, the kind fencer

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    Thank you, everyone... I was in REALLY crappy shape when this came out.... so, yeah... I was really depressed. I talked 2 my best friend, and she helped me feel alot better... at least I have another 5 year old niece...
    *drives for four hours, finds niece, gives her BIIIIIIIG hug, comes home*
     
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