A Feeling of Doom

Discussion in 'Fan Poetry' started by lanaia74, Oct 23, 2007.

  1. lanaia74

    lanaia74 New Member

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    I just can't believe this over whelming feeling of doom that plagues my soul
    I try and ignore this thing, but this feeling is so very strong
    On my physical being, this feeling is starting to take a toll
    This feeling, within my life this thing doesn't belong.

    I never listen to television, because news reports are so very sad
    Always reporting the bad, nothing hardly ever said about the good
    But this over whelming sense of doom, the feeling I have is one that is very bad
    I have always been sensitive to things, that others couldn't feel, but I could.

    My husband tells me, I'm just letting my imagination get away from me
    Maybe he is right, so I try to heed what he tells me
    But this feeling of doom is just so strong, it makes me fell like I want to flee
    But I don't know the source, so where would I go? I really don't know how to handle this, I just know this feeling shouldn't be.

    I try to put my mind on something differant, but the feelong does not escape me
    No matter what I try and do, this horrific feeling of doom remains
    What ever this feeling represents, the end result I am afraid to see
    This thing is driving me crazy, could it be I'm going insane?

    Maybe if I read, that will keep my mind off what I feel
    But that doesn't work either, as the feeling seems to intensify
    I really try to ignore this thing, but this feeling I have is so real
    I just don't understand, there is no need to question why.

    To break a deafening silence, I try to find some music on the radio
    What I hear the announcer of the news say, for the feeling I have my answer as to why.
    " A nuclear weapon has been lauched toward the U.S., from this there is no where to go
    The feeling of doom is then answered as I realize soon we all will die.





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  2. The peoples champion

    The peoples champion The peoples champion

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    Good poem, seems like you really put some time and effort into this one :).
     
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    Jingojolene Wayfarer, heartlander

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    ^.^ what is this poem fan poetry of?
     
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    It's basically a place where people can write stories, poetry and what ever they wish. I don't really think about the name "fan poetry", I guess they could not come up with anything better LOL.