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Old 08-05-2007, 09:39 PM   #1
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Almighty crystal ball

The weather was warm as a desert today, with sweat rolling of our skin
I feel the heat of the sun boiling from with-in
As we all try to have fun today, if we dont care of our selves we may have a price to pay
For now it is night, no sun in sight it appears it will rain the rest of the day

Me and friends played tennis today, and me and a friend won as well
Even-though we where both drunk, we where playing in a great funk
As you all can tell every time we hit the ball we nearly fell
How can this be? that a friend and me drank and payed no such fee?

We will start to feel it later, as all the beer goes to our head
A very good possibility after i write this poem i may go to bed
Tommorow the sun will shine, hopefully me and my friend will feel fine
A battle is at stake anougher tennis match if our bodies can take

My friend hits the ball like Babe Ruth, it can barely stay in the the court
The ball is flying like a bomb in the air, my friend does not care
This is his style and he will make this time worth your while
I am finese and a soft hitter some people may be bitter

Every-once in a while i may hit one very far, i hope it never hits a car
It is getting late at night, i am around many people at this place
Time is elsapse and move to ten, its a matter of when
So i came here to send a message just in case, if ten comes quick

I will have to head back to my cabin, if that is the case
This place will close soon, it has been open since before noon
55 minutes i have left, this story will in time be done
So there is no hurry to be on the run

I type like lightening, my mind races agaisnt the clock and the beer
No need to have no fear, the beer will not win just yet please so not fret
This is something i would not place a bet, i am the master of my skill
How much i write and how good i may be is a matter of the human will

Noise is around me, people are getting louder does this bother me?
No way, i am like a baseball pitcher simply blocking everything out
So im not going to get angry if a impatient mother begans to shout
There is a game room in front of me, the space is in a square

You do not need to pay a fare, but the games are not free so you have to pay a fee
I sit alone in this chair, typing very fast i am having a blast
People look at me and say why? i bring my computer here for free wi-fi
I write a story, a poem i would not mind to show them

But these people do not understand this kind of man
Who thinks for ever, and every minute i see a picture
And it is full of color and life, people do not see it
Becuase when they read about such stories they refuse to believe it

So as the time of ten strikes closer, i see more people move over
The day shall drawl to a end tommorow i have a tennis championship to defend
I am drinking water in a bottle, which makes my mind go full throttle
So the noise will become slowly a calm of the wind, people sleep

But people like me choose to weep of things that happen and things that should be
Why does such knowledge and such thinking always drawl a tremendous fee
There is a big screen in front of me, has a show for you to know
But i shall also let you know you have entered a anougher show

I bring a main event, under a blue and brown tent
With words and pages, and many great phrases
My head has started to hurt i will quickly blurt
So does my friend he looks worse than me, the drinking has made him pay a fee

Yet he is taller and bigger than thee, but like the beer like i like my ears
Oh my people have ice cream and treats i love sugar and desserts
But i tend to eat soo much my stomache begins to hurt
I think i have sun burn, i feel it on my skin

To feel the burning fire under my shirt
When i wake up i know for a fact i will hurt
Almighty crystal ball i know you after all
Who will ever take the wisdoms fall

To find the greatest story teller of all
Cannot be me, as you all can see
All the things i suffer from or live with have also made me pay a fee
As you all can see, yet i am good like i know i should be

I always wanted to take a cruise around the sea
With people around, and they can always be found
This makes me thing of what a wonderfull story to be bound
Can it happen, can it be made true

Could i ever share such a story with someone not known by few
People have just took a seat, i think they just began to eat
It is late, this would be a debate on how my stomache may choose my fate
I think they are eating a little too late

My body is sore becuase of a winning score
I done something i demanded my body to do all so much more
So what if i hurt this is nothing new, only that i just shared it with you
I feel alert and alive, but my body feels different

To know and feel that running your heart out has a feel
Heat and being active may take a great toll
But i think it makes the mind very happy and helps the soul
That is my cheif goal, water is a thirst quencher

Dasani is the water, bottled from Pa from the Cocola company
Had no clue they made water for me and you
It is blue and yet also clear that is the outside bottle
I have made the description all so clear

The table is red and brown and not so round
Made lfrom wood like it should
My computer is laying on it, napkins and ketchup are there
Between salt and pepper i see i just cannot compare

People are still ordering food i think they are in a good mood
I see a green t-shirt dude, he is my friend
To see others having a fun time, it is 34 minutes past nine
So sad that this story may have to come to an end

I know others will read it and many i know cannot beat it
This skill, this ability brings such clearity
My mind is a blur, i wonder that for?
The day is drawing to an end

I have soo many thoughts and things i want to send
To see people look at my eyes, never to fear of the flies
Do these humans see me? what do they think of thee?
I type on and on and the story begins to take shape

Might have to cut it with plastic tape
It's down to about 10 people around me
More are in the game room, they dont see this sleepy doom
These others been running around since noon

I think its about time for this story to come to a close
When will i write my next story no-body knows
For sure it will be noon, my best thoughts never enter my mind before noon
Late night battle, just hoped in the sattle

Too bad this area will close, well my mind might become blank
Ha!! this cannot be, i mean its me i have many ideas as far as the eyes can see
Final lines, final bow i knew this would come some-how
I guess i will be back soon , good bye for now
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Old 08-07-2007, 10:01 AM   #2
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Have you ever published? If you haven't you should be! Superb!
I have never published a book, thank you for such great comments .
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