Megalith - a beginning of a new movie. What do you think?

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in short:
Quenby finds and saves Prince Mac Cuillaume, her true love. Cuillaume assisted by dwarves, the wind, and the birds saves her from the enchanted forest, the underworld, and from the fiery dragon of chaos in fierce battles, and can with her open a new dimension of eternal youth at the gate of Aasa, the henge of the ancient temple.

This is the beginning of a screenplay:

As a bird gliding in the air, the ancient Tall City stronghold, sand dunes, bog pools, megalithic stone patterns, and thatch roofed farms below are moving by. Shortly the landscape starts to be damaged as if someone has ridden through it with a boat and left behind great trenches, dikes, and ditches. At a moment when something like a tail of a dragon is demolishing a small hill with huts and a wooden stronghold, then a blow of fire at the village. Pulling back revels this reflection coming from a round stone that is hanging on a dirty chest. It is MAC CUILLAUME, a ten year old boy. He plays with a winged lizard-like frog tadpole who’s body is like an ox, fore and hind legs like frog’s and the tail like a chain of a long snake, letting it climb and wiggle on him. There is something in his hand that the frog wants and he’s trying to keep away from him. Sun rise up in the hills of breath taking landscape. Light peaceful rustic string and fife MUSIC in harmony with the TWITTERING birds fills the air.

The boy’s stepfather, ODE, comes closer, sets his large knap-pouch on the ground.

ODE
Son, come here. Sit here beside me.
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some background on the screenplay

Theme: True love breaks the bonds of death and (True love goes beyond death.)

Sub theme: The winning of the dragons of our lives through true love is the essence of the hero.

When Cuillaume has slain the Dragon: Below the hill, the hero is carrying Quenby, in the megalithic corridor marked with pointed granite pillars bordering the massive crowds. He is dripping with sweat, looks like he can go just a little further. Quenby: „You are a mighty army the end of chaos.” Cuillaume: „When we bind the Spewer down, and keep it down, then we are a mighty army.”

Protagonist: Cuillaume the Prince of Aisti (with Quenby). Cuillaume (Hands) and Quenby (Lily) change appearance while in the Underworld.

Antagonist: Gwendamort (with his group of witches, black cat, little lizards) He is present in different dimensions with a different form:
Mortal – Spewer, the Northern Frog, or the Dragon
In the World of the Dream (the transitional aria behind the river of Toonemaa) he appears disguised as – Ronan (the woodchopper and the guide in the forest for lost dreamers)
Underworld – Gwendamort (the devil)

[ix_silver]

The silence is not so good, so here a bit more:

“THE MEGALITH” - “The Gate of Aasa, Quenby, and The Journey of The Prince
The Slayer of Dragons”

Paragraph: Quenby finds and saves Prince Mac Cuillaume, her true love. Cuillaume assisted by dwarves, the wind, and the birds saves her from the enchanted forest, the underworld, and from the fiery dragon of chaos in fierce battles, and can with her open a new dimension of eternal youth at the gate of Aasa, the henge of the ancient temple.

Synopsis:
An ancient Tall City stronghold at the Land of Aisti, ....


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