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Old 07-20-2007, 04:46 PM   #1
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Message in a bottle

Life is passing by i see it in the sky
Love it is so true, it is not new
the world that knows what it is to be
Feelings that never go away, you know this you see

I feel this way, it wont go away
I think of you all the time is this wrong?
No clue, nothing else to do but live my life for now
Dance away the pain, tears that fall from the sky

Come from my eye, words that come from my heart
They never seem to start, i tremble to think
That we will forever be apart
This is not fair, nothing to compare this is not art

I can fix this, i can change the ending of the story
No need to worry about your thoughts and worries
I am so true, and this is scary to you
Never to be seen, nothing you can do

Red is the color of love and blood
Happyness and sadness come hand in hand
Across the lands of the world, once again
The sun will rise and the moon will shine

You will be fine in time, like a river
Silence may come and go like the wind
But love i came to deliver, and be the giver
Never give up on love becuase it is still there

We can be a great pair, if you are unaware
Crying i know this pain it drives me insane
But i will overcome this madness and defeat the sadness
I will stay strong and prove people wrong

Roses, gifts and my voice will be yours
If you want it again, you know i will be waiting for you
You know this is true, what are you going to do?
The clock is ticking, my skin sweats of fear

Is this the end it better be not
I still feel, i still have a heart
This is the beggining not the end
Too many great stories to send

Let destiny take its place
Just in case, i will send my heart straight to you
It's a risk for me, i could pay a fee
This decision is all down to me

Let the pieces fall where they may
The end of this story will be okay
I gave it my all, i just may fall from the heavy load
Kiss me and make me a prince not a toad

Why do i ask these questions in my mind?
That i find from the heart that could be a sign
Let this be a mark of time in my life
I need to enjoy some fine wine

I live a life of pain and silence
But the thoughts are gold and pure
Always ready for the score of wisdom i say
If it's okay, if not i will go away

I know, i feel and i am fighting a battle
Indeed i climbed back in the saddle
Ride the horse to victory is the story
Never give up, that is death to the soul

You must always have a goal
If not you will turn to coal
But i know i will win, its in my blood
Eventhough evil lives in the mind

It wont win, becuase i am in different than most
Hey here's a toast to the future and good times
They will come sooner or later i know for sure
This thought is so pure, their is no cure


Life is like a pond, cast a stone
You will never be alone, must keep hope
Stay positive in your heart, never fall apart
Once gain my message is ever clear, easy to cope

Cleaning up the darkness and the sign
Of the world that is so dark and unkind
Once again i rise from my bed again
To deliever a message to ones i can find

May we all find our happyness
Wake up and see the sun shining again
I will predict a new part of my life
Next chapter there will be a smile on my face again

For now i will climb the mountain of life
And search for a potential wife, it appears so hard
I'm ready for the challenge, i will play the nice guy card
To dance, to sing to feel the words come back

Put things back on track, and find what i lack
Could be a brutal attack from the evil
I know this will happen again and again
Never knowing when it will end

Must continue on, let things go
Dont let things hurt your vision
Could be the end of a great decision
A time i ought to let you all know

To persevere with the show
Odd about how much i know
I just let the wisdom flow
Like a flying arrow

Sky can be blue, things can be true
Time to move on and do something new
Might be time i forget about you
You seem to forget about me, what can i do?

This heart is confused again, what can change this
I know what could, a sign of care from evils lare
Jump in the fire, we will find who is the liar
Wont be me,as you can see i have paid a fee

So i sit in my chair, very awake cant sleep
The thoughts i have said make me feel alive
Ready to party in the sky, only if i could fly
The question is why?

The earth may be dark, but there is good as well
It's my call to tell or cast a spell
Never dwell as you know i have and everyone can tell
I must go on, cant die now or tommorow

Too much to do, this is so true
But the feeling is hard to overcome
A burden i have given my self, has nothing to do with wealth
But i would like to make a wish for good health

Back to the thoughts that plagued me so
Things i have let you all know
I need someone to block the pain again
One word i have been wanting to hear to solve my fear

Is this time coming near or far
Due time to wish upon a star
Never to deceive i must beleive
I feel the rain on my face, no disgrace

I do think about what could be
If ever to think of a "you and me"
Would be a great dream
To consider 2 amazing people a team

I am alone again, not good
10 years of pain, have quickly came
I'm not the same as i once was
I know this so, i have to let the past go

My hands are of sweat, my eyes burn
The heart still yearns for that special one
So i will never think of ending my life with a gun
The soul is always on the run

Bricks lay the foundation of this nation
But who created the heart and made us all apart
This story could be the start, to mend a broken heart
I feel this way, all day every day nothing to say

Must stop this now before it takes over me
But my heart is the key, where is the chest?
Who can be my special box?, save my soul
These emotions have taken their toll

Yet i shall go on, just like this story
I have amazed you again, im shocked as hell
The gold is somewhere i sense its near
I put my mind in anougher gear

No one has this gear, i began to fear
What is occuring?, how can i be saved
Ha i already said it, and due time i spread it
2 heads are better than one, i cry a tear

To my suprise, the eyes are full of care
And full of despaire, i am aware
To know that poision is in the world
How to avoid it?, i just stare

The phone never rang, i called her like i said
Empty thoughts empty my head
This relationship is good as dead
The voyage is on again, in a count of ten
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Old 07-22-2007, 01:22 PM   #2
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Wow! Such depth and emotion! You are becoming TOO good!
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