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The peoples champion
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Figure eight in my mind
Thinking of the state of the Nation
I don't think it's right If love is a dozen i roses Then i will buy them all If you think i am wrong then you make the call You should never force your emotions Becuase some are not interested at all If life is a beautiful rainbow. Then the gold is at the end of the line If only this person could show me a sign Love will start a new revolution, it will happen in a matter of time If you are my beautiful flower, then i will be your Bee. I wish i can be with your right now, if only the world will let us be. Looking at the fast moving river, this could make my night. Wondering where my lady is, she is a beautiful sight. I can't beleive i found the one that just might change my life I found too many people that where not my type. But now i have feeling to beleive in the hype. The world is a sea of the angels, there is one for me. I think i just found the angel for me. The land is evil temple, nothing seems so right. But i take a look at you and things seen to turn bright. The sky is the map of the nation. To find out who is right for the best of me. I think the search could be over no more searching in the seven seas.
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03-11-2007, 11:13 AM
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Re: Figure eight in my mind
You are so talented!
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03-11-2007, 02:50 PM
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Re: Figure eight in my mind
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03-15-2007, 12:58 PM
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Re: Figure eight in my mind
Two great poets together
 Both of your poems rock! Rock on dudes!
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"Thinking of you, wherever you are. We pray for our sorrows to end, and hope that our hearts will blend. Now I will step forward to realize this wish. And who knows: starting a new journey may not be so hard, or maybe it has already begun. There are many worlds, and they share the same sky - one sky, one destiny." - Kairi (kh2) 
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03-15-2007, 06:00 PM
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