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Old 01-08-2007, 09:35 PM   #1
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Simple feelings

When it rains it pours.
When the sun comes up it lights.
You breath in you breath out.
You go to bed the moon is out.
The sound of silence fills the air.
For some it is dispair.
The sweat that drips off your forehead
The blood which is from a cut.
The Tears from a broken heart.
Are the things we feel that are not apart.
Simple pleasures fill the sky.
To wonder what happened to you and i.
We where friends, buddies the closest of all.
Now i feel a thick and high wall.
The journey shall begin.
To find a love from with-in.
For some one to give and trust.
The love that is a must.
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Old 01-09-2007, 07:39 AM   #2
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Old 01-09-2007, 09:42 PM   #3
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Thank you for such kind words. Seeing your work actually motivated me to start writing again .
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