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Old 12-31-2006, 09:52 AM   #1
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I am the ruler and pharaoh of all you survey here
I was born of this life and also of another dimension too
Being half man, half God I must make sure things remain good and clear
It is my duty to make sure both sides remain so.

My pyramid was not only built by a monetary way, but by the blood and sweat of others
Twenty-two years it took my builders to build my assurance to cross over to the other world
Making absolutely sure I cross over to the place of my ancestral brothers
So I may watch over my earthly kingdom from the other world.

My pyramid will out shine all to show I am master of both planes
Being built and shown on the Giza Plateau
Where forever the show of my strength and power shall always remain
Knowing others will know of my power from what I show.

My death house shall shadow over the rest
Forever showing of my power and worth
I, Khufu, the backbone and the greatest ruler out of all the rest
Always being able to rule over what was deemed my turf.

I have to make sure in all forever I instill fear
A pharaoh often uses this to maintain a tight rule
Making sure others to the right path I steer
But I must also seem understanding and not cruel.
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Old 12-31-2006, 06:33 PM   #2
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I am the ruler and pharaoh of all you survey here
I was born of this life and also of another dimension too
Being half man, half God I must make sure things remain good and clear
It is my duty to make sure both sides remain so.

My pyramid was not only built by a monetary way, but by the blood and sweat of others
Twenty-two years it took my builders to build my assurance to cross over to the other world
Making absolutely sure I cross over to the place of my ancestral brothers
So I may watch over my earthly kingdom from the other world.

My pyramid will out shine all to show I am master of both planes
Being built and shown on the Giza Plateau
Where forever the show of my strength and power shall always remain
Knowing others will know of my power from what I show.

My death house shall shadow over the rest
Forever showing of my power and worth
I, Khufu, the backbone and the greatest ruler out of all the rest
Always being able to rule over what was deemed my turf.

I have to make sure in all forever I instill fear
A pharaoh often uses this to maintain a tight rule
Making sure others to the right path I steer
But I must also seem understanding and not cruel.
Yet anougher good poem, i see you replied to that poem i wrote last night. Thanks for the kind words. Look forward to reading more of your poems .
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